Reviews for John Connor's Horrible No Good Very Bad DayBy : DouglasNeman |
This was a great start... but I'm curious as to why you didn't go any further with it. First a teenage boy is likely to get hard again within 20 minutes .... if it takes that long. So when Cameron woke him... he should have been practically ready to pop in minutes when she offered to strip for him.
PLUS they're alone... and John could say, I'm not going to order you to strip or anything sexual... Cameron replies, but you wouldn't refuse if I offered? Her A.I. brain has a full understanding of sexual desire as she can use her assets to distract a target as needed. She also has a complete understanding of the situation. She saw John looking at those other girls. She knows that his hormones are raging. There is an inheient need for release and she would take the initiative to strip and fuck him... so he'll be more relaxed and thinking clearly. He's stressed out.... this will improve his state of mind and overall attitude. IMHO.
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