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Reviews for Charmed Tales - 04 - Who's the Boss...

By : Oric13
  • From ANON - Dhruv on November 20, 2006
    And ofcourse the writer love this fic so fukin hot need a great fuck and please just stay with the Halliwell sisters!
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  • From ANON - Dhruv on November 20, 2006
    Someone write chapter 4 where prue fully submits to Phoebe, Piper is very turned on by the truth and all three charmed ones fuck!
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  • From ANON - Dhruv on November 20, 2006
    If you watch Charmed and you are practically as hard as a rock, then this is the perfect release!
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  • From ANON - Alias on October 05, 2006
    Hey, I just came across this story and just HAD to say; very well done.
    This is very well written and damn hot. I especially like how clean it’s written. Which that I mean, there are people that wire stories and than use words like ‘cunt’ so often that is seems that they get a dollar for every time they mention it. Don’t get me wrong, I don’t have a problem with words like that; if I did, I would be reading stories here. :D But I think that words (of any kind) should be used when it’s right to use them, and not simply when there is a opportunity to put them in. You managed that very well. So, good story, and well written.

    Now, since this is called a review, let me also mention one minus. The boldly written ‘whack’ that at some points even grew out to a ‘WHACKKKK!!!!!’ After having red it in bold once or twice, I get the get that it’s hard and not just a slap. I would suggest using the bold only once or twice when a spanking session stars. You already have build in the hits getting harder by adding the extra letters and the exclamation marks. They really don’t also need to be cold on top of that.

    Now, lastly, I think you can take the fact that this is my only negative comment as a testimony as to how much I like this story.
    Well done indeed. And I sure hope that you’ll get around to finishing it at some point.


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  • From ANON - Emanuel on September 03, 2006
    Well, well... what can I say other than "It's been a while"...? A while since I've last checked back to see if you've posted new or updated ongoing stories; a while since you've updated this story... The good thing is, taking off some time from writing doesn't seem to affect your creativity at all - Chapter 3b is a great addition to what pretty much is my favorite story of yours (and I've read them all, you know that). I really like the idea of the story and even though I don't remember Prue's character that much (hey, it's been 6 years since she's been on Charmed!), trying to break in a naturally dominant or domineering person is always good stuff for a story.

    Look forward to reading more of this!
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  • From ANON - anon on August 23, 2006
    Please update soon
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  • From ANON - Alex on August 16, 2006
    PLEASE UPDATE ASAP!!!!
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  • From Oric13 on August 12, 2006
    Considering only two people bothered to review this story since the last time I updated, I've decided to focus my writing efforts on some of my other stories instead. If people are too lazy to write a review of about 25 words, I don't see why I should work my ass off to write a new 10.000 words chapter. It's not like I'm getting paid for this.
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  • From ANON - Sam on August 11, 2006
    Seriously, where's the update? It has been WAY too long!
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  • From ANON - Cake on July 18, 2006
    Much love for the FemDom! Im wondering where their Whitelighter is during all of this. Is Leo enjoying the show from the sidelines or will he be joining in at some point? I eagerly await more.
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  • From ANON - Guy 88 on July 16, 2006
    HOT HOT HOT HOT HOT HOT!!!!
    MORE BDSM!!!!!
    CONTINUE SOON PLZZZ!!!!!
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  • From ANON - john on July 01, 2006
    ... Possibly the HOTTEST chapter of the entire story. Can't wait until Phoeboe reveals herself to Piper. Can't wait for more.

    UPDATE ASAP!
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  • From Oric13 on February 10, 2006
    I'm almost ready to update this - chapter 3b should be finished sometime in the next few days. Although since story/chapter upload has been disabled I don't know if it's possible to update in the next few days.
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  • From ANON - GG on February 09, 2006
    lol oops i mean UPDATE UPDATE UPDATE!!!
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  • From ANON - GG on February 09, 2006
    omg so hot! love the story please REVIEW REVIEW REVIEW!!
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