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Reviews for Experiments

By : Vandalia1998
  • From kylielink on July 11, 2010
    loved it.
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  • From ANON - Chris on June 14, 2006
    This was quite a good read, but your style is rather stilted, and it feels rushed - we know they're having sex, but some more description of the action would have improved it. You need to watch the dialogue: I'm surprised at some of the mature things these 11 and 13 year-olds said! The layout is crap - why so many lines with only one or two words on them? - and makes following the flow of the story difficult, and needs tidying up. Nevertheless, a creditable effort.
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  • From SaraJaye on September 30, 2003
    Well, THAT certainly was interesting. The bit at the end with the actors was amusing.
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  • From ANON - Zach on September 22, 2003
    Great story
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  • From ANON - vgss on August 28, 2003
    Liked reading it. Could use some slow-down, and a bit less cliches, but still enjoyable :)
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