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Reviews for Data's Desire

By : OtakuQueen
  • From ANON - nathasa on June 13, 2013
    esta es una gran historia, espero que algún día la retome. Por favor no la deje así. Gracias.
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  • From Topcat on June 26, 2009
    Alright, so, it's been 6 years since this story was updated. No doubt this review will never be received.

    Still...
    You should at LEAST do a complete spelling/punctuation check before publishing. There are numerous errors throughout.
    Also, your main character Narak truly lacks real qualities. You characterise Data relatively well presumably because you have spent a great deal of time going over his personality (hey, we all have), but it really comes out in the story that Narak seems 'thrown together'. I mean, okay, she's got an eating disorder. This contributes to her seemingly unsure/sheepish manner.... However quite contrarily, she is comfortable with performing a duet with a senior officer, FOR senior officers at the slightest suggestion! Which is it?

    Furthermore, what real reason does Data have for 'liking' this girl, other than her supposed 'androgynous' nature?
    I mean, Data is expressing the one, single, most important aspect of his life to her in Chapter 1: His struggle to emulate and eventually gain humanity. And all she responds with is, 'Sounds confusing'?!?!
    Talk about flimsy.

    This story recieves:
    B for proofreading
    C for characterisation,

    but after all, the point is...

    you got an A- for the sex scene. And thats why we're all here, aint it?

    P.s. Shameless plug, read MY Data fic.
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  • From ANON - Lilith fairest on January 27, 2006
    Aww, no more? I was enjoying it too =(
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  • From ANON - Newtype on October 27, 2005
    I love the stroy but could you PLEASE add more parts? I am ripping my hear out waiting and my minds way to imaganative to conclusivly find a proper ending for it! I also think you are a fellow Data fan, did it not suck when he died in Star Trek Nemaisis? I mean it blows chunks of everything nasty yet alas Brent Spiner gave them a cart blonch for it! Will wait with great antisipation for more parts and PLEASE e-mail me when you do!
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  • From ANON - Dee Wolf on May 18, 2005
    You've captured Data perfectly!!! I love it!!!
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  • From ANON - Mica on April 27, 2005
    I'm truly enjoying this story and I hope you continue it. I've always had a "weird" thing for Data. LOL, sigh...would rub your back until YOU were tired of it, fix anything you would like to eat and be a whiz with computer upgrades & repairs!
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  • From ANON - Shayaelle on April 11, 2005
    A little irregular and farfetched with Data's "emotions" towards the girl but... I loved it. You should continue! We need a Part III to finish things off...
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  • From ANON - Dark topaz on December 03, 2004
    Come on u got to update
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  • From ANON - Dark Topaz on September 06, 2004
    Please update soon please
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  • From ANON - Michelle on December 14, 2003
    Interesting story. I look forward to reading more.
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  • From BigGator5 on November 21, 2003
    Oh, my, god! Great stuff! I'm looking forward to reading much more!
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  • From ANON - Kimberly on October 24, 2003
    More, more, more! Great story so far, really pulled me into the plot.
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  • From Strawberries on October 09, 2003
    It's great so far! Love it! As I may have said before, everyone is sooo in character. Nice plot line. Very well written. Love the
    interaction between Narak and Data! Will be waiting for your next update. Ras.
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  • From ANON - Babs on October 09, 2003
    Oh, how sad! I really like this story! Please update as soon as possible!
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  • From Strawberries on October 05, 2003
    HIYA! Love the first chapter! You have excellent writing skills. This story is very well written. The characters are all in there true
    rolls (meaning they are all in character.) ^_^. Dialoge is perfect. I saw no mistakes in grammer or puntuation. If there were, I didn't realize it because I was engrossed with reading. I will await patiently for your next chapter. Ras.
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