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By : MrSchimpf
  • From ANON - shadows of faith on October 20, 2005
    lol i just left a review about the site and here you are again i love this fic keep going
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  • From ANON - Anthony on October 18, 2005
    Excellent work. Despite a couple setbacks, that was a great first date for the girls. I love that they've become so intimate and comfortable with each other. Some people might say they're moving too fast (both other readers and characters in the story if they were to find out). But the way you've written this tale, it's clear that Rory and Paris truly love each other. They share a very deep bond with each other, and I'm glad to see them exploring it further, physically and emotionally.

    I'm starting to get annoyed with Lorelai, though. Rory hasn't even come clean about the relationship and already her mother is putting Paris down. Yes, Paris can an intense person even when she's content and relaxed. I also think she can be a little too intellectual and serious at times, and there is such a thing (and I say this being a 'nerd' myself). And she did treat Rory pretty badly on many occasions. However, Lorelai has to see that she's changing. She's opening up from her shell and bonding with Rory in a way no one else has before. She deserves a chance to prove herself. If she can't even accept Paris as a friend, how will she accept her as Rory's girlfriend? There's already going to be a lot of disapproving folks: Richard and Emily, a lot of the Chilton brood, Taylor, Dean, and even Jess might be pissed now that he lost his shot at Rory.

    Rory and Paris are going to need all the support they can get. In Paris' case, she has nobody except for the Gilmore girls and her father, who isn't there to provide a stable home thanks to her witch of a mother. As for her 'friends', one's almost as twisted as Summer, and the other isn't brave enough to stand up for herself. No matter what happens, she's going to need Lorelai. As for Lorelai, she also has to realize that she can't keep Rory an innocent little girl forever. She's so terrified that Rory will turn out like her that she almost avoids the topic of sex altogether. Unless of course, it concerns her, in which case, it's perfectly alright to have a fling with her ex (Max and Christopher) or make dirty jokes about her and Luke. But throw in the possibility of Rory in any type of sexual situation, and start the Lorelai Gilmore panic alarm, ladies and gentlemen.

    Of course, the thing here is that Rory being a lesbian negates any chance of her getting pregnant, and having someone as smart and competitive as Paris will ensure that Rory doesn't get discouraged from her college-bound oath. Not to mention, Paris just plain makes her happy, in a way that Dean or Jess never could. There's a great bright side to be found in the situation, if Lorelai is just willing to see it.
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  • From ANON - acepilot on July 18, 2005
    I've been reading this when I can. Sorry I haven't reviewed for ages!

    Great fic. One of the very best on the net, no question. It's so meticulous and detailed it's fantastic. Keep up the great work.
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  • From ANON - Anthony on February 18, 2005
    Great job on the latest chapter! I'd say the months it took you to write were well worth it. Ignore the person who said it's tedious and poorly written. Characters as interesting and complex as Paris and Rory deserve a good amount of character development. If you ask me, your story's written much better than a lot of the lame Rory/Jess or Rory/Tristan stories that are plentiful at sites like fanfiction.net. Not to say that there aren't great stories with those pairings, because there are, but there are also a lot that just throw the characters together with little thought to build up and exploring their personalities and struggles. You don't do that and it gives your fanfic something that a lot of the ones with 'normal' pairings don't.

    I really look forward to the next chapter, and I hope you do complete this story eventually. There are very few Rory/Paris fanfics as it is, and yours is the only one I've seen that has any chance of ever being completed. It's disappointing, considering what a great pair the two girls make. If you ask me, they have a better connection on the show than Rory ever did with either Dean or Jess. They have great chemistry, and it makes me wonder how different their relationship would play out if our society were one that accepted same-sex couples as being no different than heterosexual couples. In any case, keep the great work up.
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  • From ANON - Jareth on January 26, 2005
    Hooray! An update!
    I enjoy this story greatly, and this chapter lives up to the rest of it quite well. I can't help but wonder how this alternate storyline will tie in the the original one...Paris seems a lot calmer now. Maybe she won't blow that harvard interview?
    Shouldn't this chapter have been called, "And then Paris kissed me"?
    Keep writing. Or I shall unleash the mimes. Don't make me do that. It's an incredible hassle getting them back into the jar afterwards.
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  • From ANON - Jeff on January 11, 2005
    dude PLEASE update! Your story is the only reason that I still check GG fanficiton. I probably look like 5 times a week just to see if you've updated. I've been deprived of good writing for too long so please get this next chapter out as quickly as possible. I'll consider it an early birthday present.
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  • From ANON - Jareth on January 09, 2005

    I can only re-read the same chapter so many times, even if it IS Paris/Rory....when are you going to update? Please don't tell me that's the end! We still have to see this last part from Rory's POV! We still have to see how their friends react! We still have to see how Paris will react to Rory's dealing with Francie! More! For the love of the Great Green Arklesiezure, more!
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  • From ANON - Jareth on January 04, 2005
    Still waiting for an update! Man, I didn't think there was anyone on the planet who was a slower writer than I....but then, your chapters are a lot longer than mine. Hurry up and write more! I love this pairing, and yours is the best example of it I've found. I love the reference to Paris' dating Asher in this last chapter, by the way. I found it a little creepy, myself. :P
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  • From on October 22, 2004
    Amazing, simply amazing. This is by far the best fic that I have ever read.
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  • From ANON - Jareth on September 12, 2004
    This story is awesome. I'm really loving the way you keep replaying the same scenes, but from both points of view. When will you be updating? I must have more!
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  • From ANON - Elwood on May 20, 2004
    I love what you have written so far (through part 5). It is wonderful to see such attention to detail, and a delayed gratification for the characters. Hearing both Paris's and Rory's points of view through the same period in time, where they are unwittingly falling for each other - it's just great. I can't wait for more chapters!
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  • From ANON - Joshua on May 19, 2004
    I love it!, I I hope you post some more soon..:) I think you've just hooked me to Gilmore Gifemsfemslash though..:)
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  • From ANON - Acepilot on May 14, 2004
    Brilliant. This story can be largely credited for getting me into Gilmore Girls Slash, and I'm hanging out to know what happens next.
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  • From ANON - Misty on April 26, 2004
    i love this story you should continue it and your characterizations are spot on good job hope to see more
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  • From ANON - Anon on April 21, 2004
    Hmmm... very nice. You should definitely continue this story.
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