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Reviews for I Know What You Want

By : TickTock
  • From sweetjane on November 07, 2005
    I really liked the way you incorporated your story into the X-files universe so seemlessly, I don't think there is enough work that does that, most people resort to AU to make their plots and idea's work. I also don't think there is enough Scully/others, so kudo's for originality. My favorite parts were Scully's orgasm revelation, and anything to do with Bogg's devil tattoo, it made the story have such a much broader reach than "Scully has psychic sex", which was great. Some con-crit: I felt the exposition at the beginning was a little clunky. A nit-pick: you often use the word "than" when you mean "then". Personal thought: I would have thought Boggs' character would be more dominating and perhaps a little less tender, and Scully perhaps a little more resistant, but that is just me. ( I know I hate it when people give me critisizm like that. I tried to phrase it in such a way that it wouldn't really change your story to follow the advice. But seriously, I've submitted stories and had people review with comments like "maybe you should set it in the future so everyone is older" and "I don't think so-and-so is a good pair, maybe you should make it so that it's whatsis face instead", so go ahead and ignore it completely, if it doesn't fit with your vision of the story)
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  • From ANON - Andrew on November 06, 2005
    very very erotic story- I'm glad to see I'm not the only one who was intrigued by the chemistry between Boggs and Scully and it's a very darkly-sexy idea to see them joined this way in the story (the line about the devil on his chest against Scully's breasts was particularly vividly erotic!) I hope you write another Scully/Other story sometime as there's such a drought of them online and I'd love to see you write another one concerning her and Boggs which is even more hotter and erotic!
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