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By : GrumpyWriter
  • From ANON - Dominique on December 06, 2004
    chris is just sooooo hott! the scene btwn chis and phoebe wasnt as awkward as i thought it would be.. it seemed pretty smooth and i like how they got a lil clsoer from talking! great! write more! and write more of ur new story because im hooked to that too!
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  • From ANON - ashlee on December 06, 2004
    everytime i read a chapter of ur story, it keeps me on the edge of my seat wanting more!! amazing! please update this and ur other story too!!
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  • From ANON - Janice on December 06, 2004
    im so happy that u update so fast! loved the chapter as always! chris and phoebe's relationship is realli cute! hehe, update soon!
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  • From ANON - xfaytx on December 06, 2004
    another excellent chapter! i liked the exchange btwn phoebe and chris.. seemed natural~ keep updating!
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  • From ANON - dominique on December 04, 2004
    smut! yay! love ur chapters with smut! how old is chris now? sorry, random question... ne ways, cute chapter! chris talking dirty during sex was hot and cute! he seemed like he was babbling... so cute! loved it! write more soon please!
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  • From ANON - jessie on December 04, 2004
    freebe??? the whole bickering btwn phoebe and piper was funni and cute~ wyatt and chris are so hot together! and chris looked so cute on the couch sleeping! more please!
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  • From ANON - janice on December 04, 2004
    chris and wyatt were both sooo hot in that premonition!!! poor phoebe... think a how disturbing it was for her to watch that.. or, u can think lucky phoebe because she just got to see the hottest guys in the world have sex! hahaha, cant wait to see wat u bring in the next chapter! LOVE ur other story too!! but u can just read my reivew!
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  • From ANON - ashlee on December 04, 2004
    an aunt just saw her nephew(s) ( she doesnt kno about chris yet) make love with another guy... how awkward is that?!?! good thing both her nephews are soooo hot!! and by the way
    “I um Piper…”

    “Spill freebe!”
    freebe? hahahaha, i thought that was hillarious!!!!
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  • From ANON - Julie on December 02, 2004
    Great story. I can't believe that Phoebe now knows. Love to see her reaction when she finds out that Chris and Wyatt are brothers. Phoebe jumping up and down was funny. Chris and Wyatt having sex was playful and hot. And lastly finding out that Chris and Wyatt are soulmate is cool.
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  • From ANON - Eloise on December 01, 2004
    Here's a tidbit for your Gremlin! I feel kind of bad that every review I leave is along the same lines of "I love your stories! Please write more!" But that's essentially the whole point of my reviews. I don't bother leaving reviews for stories I don't like. But is you could find your way so that Wyatt and Chris stay together, having great sex at every opportunity and rule the world it would make me very happy.
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  • From ANON - xfaytx on November 29, 2004
    tears were going down my cheek becasue of wyatt!!! i just felt so bad for him... he loves chris so much!! he just doesnt want his brother to die!! that was soo sweet and heartwrenching! i know chrris had to go back... but i wanted him to stay too! becasue i just had too much pity for wyatt! i never thought i would feel this bad for him, but i do!!
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  • From ANON - ~*holly*~ on November 29, 2004
    ohhh! this chapter was so cool! u r sooo great at adding in parts of the real script yet making it make sense and flow!! i thought that was awesome and u did an amazing job!! phoebe is getting another premonition of chris??? maybe she will figure out the mystery!!! i know ur following the basic story from the show.. of thats so... are u gonna make chris die??? that would break my heart... and then wyatt will be sad!! and probably go crazy... cant wait to read more!! smut to come!! YES!
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  • From ANON - Dominique on November 29, 2004
    im so happy that ur updating so often!! keep it up please! because i check this site every morning to see if u have updated!! i only go to this site becasue of u!! this chapter was bittersweet.. im glad chris went back to save wyatt... but half of me was wanting chris to stay with wyatt... becasue wyatt seemed so lost without him... PLEASE end this story with a happy ending where wyatt and chris are both happy... if u ended where wyatt and chris end up hating each other or one of them dies, it would torment me for LIFE!
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  • From ANON - Janice on November 29, 2004
    i will ALWAYS remain ur loyal reader! ur fics are good no matter what!!! did u ever consider opening up ur own web page where u could post ur stories up??? it would do SOOO well!! i was crying in this chapter... the exchange between wyatt and chris was so heart wrenching.... i felt bad for wyatt!! then wyatt killed bianca!! nice twist! loved it!!
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  • From ANON - churio on November 29, 2004
    i read this chapter 4 times!!!! it was so fun to read lines from the real show and having u add ur own twist on it! the ending was shocking!! when wyatt saved bianca only to kill her... i was in tears when i read wyatts confessions... i know im supposed to feel bad for chris, but i feltSOOOOO bad for wyatt.. please let something good happen to wyatt.. like chris forgives him or chris saves him then they can live happily ever after... sumthing!! the poor guy needs his cherub!!!
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