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By : chimera
  • From ANON - Lady Desu on October 20, 2005
    Very nice. But. You repeated yourself like twice. Number one was when Jack pulls out lube and a condom two times. And the next one his here "A moan escapes Daniels mouth, as Jack impales him. He slides in until his whole length is enclosed within Daniels warmth." Both sentences basically meant the same thing. So it makes the reader (Or at least me) go "How did Jack slide in any more then he did if he has already impaled himself in Daniel?" Other then that. It was very good.
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