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Reviews for The Commander and the Chief

By : Lursa
  • From ANON - Askari Knight on January 22, 2006
    Remarkably well-written fic. The only thing I noticed wrong was when you used "plains" instead of "planes" to describe Rhade's body. Aside from that, a good couple, excellent idea, and it is so satisfying to see Harper in that particular position. It'd be even better if Rhade flipped out of "Sub" mode and into "Dom" mode.
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  • From ANON - Be'Tor on November 09, 2004
    So far we don't have any plans for a sequel to this one. We wrote it as a stand alone story. It grew out of my fascination with and amusement at the way that Commander Harper kept whacking Rhade over the head with the nearest solid object. I'm glad you enjoyed it.
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  • From ANON - Bunnicle on November 06, 2004
    Oh, that was just yummy! are you gonna do a squel to this one? that would be so way cool!
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