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By : marianyckelpiga
  • From ANON - ItsaWash on November 12, 2005
    This was fantastic! You know how to write these two characters like you own them, I'm serious. I loved the naughty talk in the van, then on the phone, then in the men's room. Lovely build-up. And him picking her doorlock, stripping silently (zipper coming down was a nice touch) then jumping her. Only thing I can say that I wasn't crazy about was: "She wanted to tell him but it had to wait - he was pushing inside her and all rational thoughts left her as he started a rhythm that almost drove her crazy. Deep, slow thrusts…" The gap between him on top of her and then him being inside her was too quick. I would have wished for a little more lead-up, especially after all the lovely winding build-up in the other chapters. Make us wait.

    Delayed satisfaction is the best thing on earth and I don't know about you, but no matter what kind of sex I'm having, the fist time the guy puts tongue or finger or penis inside me is the moment my satisfaction is delayed no longer. Not that climax has to happen at that moment, but it's the getting-down-to-business start of it. Does that make sense? Anyhow, you don't need to change a darn thing. The fic is lovely and it was sure good for me! Gotta go slide in naked next to my husband now. I have a feeling he's gonna look a LOT like Jack to me tonight. I wonder why? LOL.
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  • From ANON - Jack_rocks on September 24, 2004
    WOW! This story is an excalation of sensuality and excitement.
    Brilliant work. Please write more of this soon. ;)
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