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Reviews for Oh Captain! My Captain!

By : MacLir
  • From RonnieBeaton on April 03, 2007
    Overall a very good story. I can kind of picture it happening "off screen" as it were.

    However, you might want to rewrite it a little bit - a space vessel (such as the Glactica) or indeed a ship at sea, does NOT have floors, walls. ceilings, doors or doorways. What it does have is decks (floors), bulkheads (walls), deckheads and/or overheads(ceilings), hatches (doors), and hatchcoamings (doorways).
    Also, as shown in a season three episode (I forget which one), Cally's full name is Cally Henderson (or at least it was before she married the Chief).

    Like I say, these are minor niggles. I'd like you to continue with this theme - Apollo and Cally having an illicit relationship while the world ends around them, maybe even have Starbuck join them for a bit of variety.
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  • From ANON - Nancy on April 13, 2005
    This was amazing! Very hot and sweet. Well done.
    nancy
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  • From ANON - Gystros on March 09, 2005
    That was very, very good. Well written, interesting, and most importantly, HOT.

    Please write more. I'm liking this pairing more by the minute.
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  • From ANON - Impressed on February 13, 2005
    Very nice. Keep writing, that was very well done.
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  • From ANON - Innogen on January 21, 2005
    Loved it. I'm fast becoming a fan of this new BSG. Your fic was perfect. I look forward to reading more~Innogen
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  • From ANON - Robbo on November 09, 2004
    You got me into this...Now Please keep going.
    Gooow. ow.
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