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Reviews for Puppet (Rewrite)

By : GrumpyWriter
  • From ANON - waiting... on October 05, 2005
    update already! its been months...
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  • From ANON - K8 on August 06, 2005
    Please don't leave it here. What happens next? (Barbarus always seemed extra creepy to me, so I think your doing great with him being so evil in this piece)
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  • From ANON - K8 on August 06, 2005
    I love the charmed universe and Chris is a favorite of mine so I love your stuff!
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  • From ANON - K8 on August 06, 2005
    Wow! I think this stuff is hot. I use to read AFF stuff for the smut, but I find myself liking more plot. I think I like the plot stuff cuz it's grown up plots. I'd love to read more.
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  • From ANON - ennui deMorte on March 19, 2005
    Ah ~ I LOVE this story!! The two scenes with Melinda were great. Seeing both Chris and Wyatt take Melinda at the same time. one up the a$$ and the other up her c*nt, would be a great hot scene to see. Also looking forward to seeing Wyatt react to his vision.

    I also really liked seeing Chris's vulnerability at being left behind, forgotten, not worth the trouble. Wyatt will just have to show his brother how important he really is to his big brother.

    Hope to see more soon!
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  • From ANON - antarianprincess85 on March 01, 2005
    I really love this story and i hope you update soon i want to read more
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  • From ANON - Reili on January 09, 2005
    w00t. Okay, I very much enjoy the rewrite. Gremlins are indeed the spawn of Satan. :D Perhaps this review will encourage them not to be so nasty? Ha, anyways, I like your writing style. You use good description. As a plus, I'm always in for Christopher's pain ... I'm very sorry, Chris.

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  • From ANON - Eloise on January 09, 2005
    YEah! Grumpy_Writer is back with his 2 Gremlins. I thought you'd got run over by a raindeer (or Germlin's wearing antlers). Looking forward to more!
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  • From ANON - Kandy on January 09, 2005
    hey! wassup?! glad to see u've returned and to give me a wonderful update! that was so hott! CAN THIS STORY GET ANY BETTA?!
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  • From ANON - xfaytx on January 09, 2005
    omg! ur finally back from u "break"!!! now that u rested (and tortured all of ur fans!), can u PLEASE update all ur stories and fast! this cahpter was a nice start to ur stream of updates to come!! loved every word!!!
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  • From ANON - ~*holly*~ on January 09, 2005
    duuuuudddeee! ur totally killing me here!! tkaing this long to update! ur torturing me!!! this cahpter did ease my pain though becasue it was just that awesome!!! that sick pervert!!! stupid barbarus!! can chris recieve ne more pity??(YES!! he can!) i just feel so bad for the guy, but he's also just so cute and hott!! update sooner please! for me?? and updating ur other stories would help too!
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  • From ANON - Janice on January 09, 2005
    yay! u FINALLYYY updated! u have the most anticipated update of all times! im checking this site everyday for YOUR updates!!! i love them sooo much! and u so did not dissapoint! i thought this was fantastic! oh, no! get out of there chris! nice touch with the vision at the end!
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  • From ANON - ashlee on January 09, 2005
    ::gasp:: are my eyes decieving? did he REALLy just update?? haha, j/p~ ahhhh!!! but im so glad u updated! i HATE waiting for ur updates! but that was soo great! wyatt, wat r u doin?! save ur brother! poor chris!! save him!! loved the chapter, love your stories, love u!
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  • From ANON - alienangel19852003 on January 08, 2005
    Yippee another chapter. i liked the re arranging you've done with this story. ive been waiting for you to review this one for a long time.
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  • From ANON - ashlee on November 04, 2004
    i was so shocked to see that u had upated! this is the update i have been most anticipating! all ur stories jus draw me in and leave me cravin for more after each chapter~ im an addict to ur writing! u writing is the best thing u can do for me! thank u so much!! so on with my comments on the chapter: i thoguht i was gonna die when i read baout chris in the shower! wyatts spell was pure torture! but all of us know chirs is jus so hot when bein tortured! and u also asked about barbarus wantin chris at the top of the chapter; my answer is yes yes absolutely yes! ne chance of chris being all tied up, tortued, and being taken is great with me!! hahaha~ melinda is also foolin around with wyatt? how could she do that to chris? well, waitin for more! so update asap!
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