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Reviews for A Past Revealed

By : charmedfanatic
  • From ANON - Hailey on October 19, 2004
    doven ven have to ask, u know we all loved that chapter!!! it was fantastic!! i love how u mixed in a lil of both evil leo and evil wyatt! the endin was depressin though! i think the next memory should either be of wat happened to the other people in the family, like ryan and piper and everyone else~ and maybe a lil toture session added in
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  • From ANON - ashlee on October 19, 2004
    another great chapter! these mempry chapters are awesome!!! i like how ur gonna make it a patterna alternating with chris and ryan duyring present day and the memories~ poor chris, followin leo into that trap!! hmm.. the next memory should be of a torture session of chris!
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  • From ANON - Julianah on October 19, 2004
    It would be cool if the next memory had Bianca in it. So fars iss is a great story.
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  • From ANON - ashlee on October 18, 2004
    that was a long chapter, yay!!! chris's family is finally gonna know wat happened to chris! i can wait to see their reaction!! the first memory they are in should tie in with what you wrote in that last chapter:
    *Maybe I should tell him, he seems really sincere, yea and he was really sincere when he led me into that alley. *
    Leo leading chris into an alley.. hmm... thats just my idea~ cant wait to read more!
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  • From ANON - Kaytie on October 18, 2004
    that was perfect! just enough emotions and drama and the endin was nice, chris and ryan.. some bondin btwn the two~ awww... ne ways, back to ur question... i think i want the fiscenscene to be of why chris hates leo so much... maybe ties in with some of evil wyatt~ this next chapter is gonna b great, i already know!
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  • From ANON - Hailey on October 18, 2004
    awwww.. the endin with chris and ryan was sweet... cant wait to see the reaction of chris's family when they find out his past... ouch... hmmm... i say the first memory should be between chris and wyatt when he is turnin evil~ guess ill find out tomorrow!
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  • From ANON - xfaytx on October 18, 2004
    that chapter was 10 times better than i could've imagined it! i liked the bondin between chris and leo! nice twist in the endin.. awww, bortherly moment! hmm first memory shoud be of a moment between evil leo and chris... i LOhis his story!!! haha... cant wait to read more tomorrow!
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  • From ANON - xfaytx on October 17, 2004
    im lovin this fic! and i LOVE how u update everyday! thats a big bonus! i think that l cha chapter was my favorite so far! i also love the fact that chris has a younger brother. i think its realli sweet. i k Lek Leo should be at toor.oor. it'll make the story more interestin i think... well, cant wait to see how everything turns out!
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  • From ANON - Hailey on October 17, 2004
    wow! u r officially the best writer EVER! that last chapter was fantastic! aww, chris has a lil brother~ i have one question, how old are chris and ryan in this fic? poor chris, every demon!! that is brutal! will the adult ever find out wats goin on? i cant believe leo is evil in the future! are you gonna show him in one of chris's dreams? this chapter was so sad. chris talkin to his mom, thinkin his parents are gonna think bad of him if they find out... aww... who to be at the door... im gonn say Piper.. cant wait to read more!
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  • From ANON - ashlee on October 17, 2004
    ahhh!! that chapter was the BEST!!! LOVED it! the shower part in chris's dream was sooo sadd! i thought i was gonna cry! hmm.. who to be at the door... i say Leo~ cant wait to read more!
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  • From ANON - Hailey on October 16, 2004
    i LOVE this story! u already got me hooked! the best part is ur gonna update so fast! im so glad u are cause i cant wait to read more of this! looking forward to more!
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  • From ANON - ashlee on October 16, 2004
    u wrote more! yay! loved the last chapter! ur such a good writer! im so glad ur updatin so fast so i dunt have to wait! thank you!! im so excited for the next chapter!
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  • From ANON - kaytie on October 16, 2004
    wow! this story is realli great! that last chapter was so sad! poor chris! i cant wait to read more!! whose ryan? i guess ill find out in the next chapter!
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  • From ANON - ashlee on October 15, 2004
    thats a great start to ur story! i hope u write more soon!
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