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Reviews for Right King of Wrong

By : DonnaLynn
  • From shirley007 on February 22, 2010
    You can't just leave it this way.
    Aren't they ever getting together?
    how sad.
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  • From kirabates on November 26, 2008
    That was TOTALLY NOT a cool ending!!!!!! I was completely into the story and then POOF! No more! It would be awesome to see more of the story, and have a way better ending!! Or a better closer maybe, that was more of a cliff hanger than anything else! Mad at the ending, love you're story, would love to see more!
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  • From ANON - jc on August 20, 2008
    please finish story it's wonderful.
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  • From ANON - Shannon on April 11, 2008
    WHAT!!! No no more please. What happens? Alec and Max have to get together
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  • From ANON - Rachael on June 10, 2006
    Max cleared her throat nervously and Alec noticed the look of discomfort on her face. Then he remembered his state of undress and raised his eyebrows to himself. He reached out and grabbed his pants and put them on. It seemed to ease the tension in the room now that they were both covered in the most important areas.

    So true. I like the way Max and Alec discuss what they just did instead of Max running out of the room like a coward.


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  • From elle6778 on July 26, 2005
    I hope you are going to continue this! I am enjoying it so far and can't wait to find out if Max and Alec do get together! It was sad that Max thought Alec just think of it as a heat incident, like it did not mean anything to him... Good job with the fic! Please, update!!
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  • From ANON - winteryn on May 27, 2005
    That was amazing i wish it didnt stop there. You really need to write more i am hooked i want to know what else will happen. Please write more, you have a gift of writing it gets me hooked.
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  • From ANON - MistressAlistra on May 10, 2005
    I liked it lots! Too bad it's unfinished. But still, good fic. :)
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  • From ANON - amniarix on March 02, 2005
    Oh yes, all the right kind of bumpy, ansty, love gone wrong, I'm confused, I'm more confused, misunderstood, pheremone ridden kind of stuff we expect from Alex and Max. Vintage!
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