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Reviews for Babes in toy land

By : CaytonJosling
  • From SublimelyStupid on March 09, 2007
    oh my god. that was quite interesting. it could've been written a little better and with more detail, but that aside, the story was extremely good. you should write more.
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  • From ANON - Doreen on June 27, 2006
    Hot, hot, hot!
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  • From ANON - dwqefd on November 12, 2005
    fdsf
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  • From ANON - DracoHerm73 on August 27, 2005
    That was hot. I really liked that. Great job!
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  • From ANON - Anon on July 12, 2005
    Marissa getting fucked doggy style by Alex wearing a strap-on? You could type blind and that would still be the best OC lemon ever.

    However, you also managed to write well. Nice work, and keep it up. Please continue the story, that was so ****ing hot I almost orgasmed reading it.
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  • From ANON - Cat on June 07, 2005
    Really good fanfic.. i mean really good!! absolutely loved it, only wished it was longer.. or that there was more!! are u ever going to post another chapter?? purleeaasseee do!! i love malex and ur fic is hot.. xx
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  • From ANON - Anon on May 28, 2005
    not bad
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  • From ANON - Somechick73 on March 19, 2005
    Your fanfic was very good, but would have been better were it much longer and started out with more detail before the sex, like more of a storyline. The only other thing I was concerned with was a couple of typos and things that didn't quite make sense, but other than that it was good. You should write more fics about Marissa and Alex.
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  • From ANON - chell on March 01, 2005
    HOT & INTENSE!!!! u SHOULD CONTINUE. gOOD START. i LOVE mARISSA/aLEX.
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  • From ANON - xx on February 28, 2005
    really good description, there shud b more a/m fics :)

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