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By : Lalique
  • From ANON - SnapesPet30 on November 23, 2005
    Great story, love how Max slowly made her feel so special and beautiful.
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  • From ANON - Anon on July 24, 2005
    i must agree, i voted a few days ago with 1 star... because how believable is it that fran would give into max after being violated by some creep on the subway? i mean honestly its not realistic. your writing style is good, however, i just didn't buy the storyline.
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  • From ANON - Sweetness on July 22, 2005
    I find it hard to believe that Fran would give into Max (I don't care if she was in love with him) after being assaulted on the train. Yes, Max would try and cheer her up but if things were starting to get hot and heavy between them. Max is a gentleman (after all, he didn't have sex with her in London athough he wanted too). IMHO, he would never take advantage of Fran if she was vunerable. It would be a little more believeable if Max and Fran slept together if the story had taken place over a period of time (say...a few days or a week).
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  • From ANON - MAXGRL on July 21, 2005
    Great job! When can we expect the sequel? Thanks for the great read and keep them coming. Maxgrl
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  • From ANON - Jenny on July 20, 2005
    "Hello Lalique!" hehe! Great fic. I really hope to see more of your work in the near future. Thanks for the late night read. Toodles
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  • From cutarugg on July 20, 2005
    great job ..i'm glad i stayed up late to finish this one. i i can have 'sweet' dreams.

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