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Reviews for Adam

By : kattanon
  • From Kiira on July 25, 2007
    I just finished reading this, found it last night and this story is simply great! Everything is described so well; how Dutch changes during his captivity, becomes Adam. and how he feels after being rescued, scared and wanting to go back to the man, who controled him. It all makes sense, full 5 starts from this one. Even the ending was just perfect, very sad bu fitting.

    In another section this would get hell of a lot more reviews and hits. I usually stick to Originals section but now did a bit of adventuring, kinda, hihi. And I am so glad I did!
    Anyway, this story would deserve many reviews! and I wish I could leave you a better one, but it's 1.30am and... feeling tired... sorry for any spelling errors.
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  • From ANON - DrkDreamer on October 01, 2006
    I can't believe you didn't get TONS of reviews for this. I suspect the new break-up of AFF into so many parts makes us miss lots of fics we would have otherwise enjoyed. These days, I concentrate mostly on 'original' and 'anime'.

    Anyway found your fic somehow - and I thoroughly enjoyed it. The descriptions of Dutch's breakdown and then the total breakdown of both Dutch and Adam were compelling and very believable. I maintained empathy with Dutch/Adam the whole way.

    The ending was perfect - it had to be.

    I've bookmarked you to read the rest of your fic as well. Assuming this story is typical - I can say that you are an excellent author - you give your characters life and make your reader CARE.

    Thank you for such a wonderful read.
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