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Reviews for Mistaken Identity

By : Kanashii
  • From ANON - Lovise on May 07, 2013
    Hi Kanashii, what a great great story!!!! Beautifully written, and even though I'm pretty sure you will probably never reply (after all I don't think you're still active in the fandom...)but I still wanted to say that I'm a bit shocked by Aria, what with her not really mentioning her first child.
    I mean it seems to me that even with the strange circonstance of her hooking up with Furio, a true mother would be mourning the loss of her children... It's like her son is "dead" to her like her old life as Charlene and I'm sorry but I can't like her for it! I get that she knows that she will never go back to them (besides she finds love and has a new child on the way)but in never thinking of him it's like she denies his existance.

    If you see that then thank you for all your wonderfull stories.
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  • From ANON - GString on November 19, 2006
    Wow that was a novel, HA-HA. Loved it tho you're characters are so cool. I know this was'nt exactly how Furio left the show but it was all good. I loved Pauly in it, Pauly is a funny gangsta one of my favs on the show.
    I can't wait to read more of you're Sopranos stuff, MAKE SOME MORE OR ELSE! J/K.
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  • From ANON - SpaceGhostC2C on November 11, 2006
    Overall I have to say I tend to like your Canziano stuff better because I really like mafia violence and dark stuff. But your Sopranos stories are really good. As Kamikazi mentioned you have some errors in this one with continunity but overall it is not a big deal. Just something for you to take note of. Wish you would do more stories on other Soprano's characters like Tony or Paulie, but I know you are a Furio fan, so oh well, no problemo. I do enjoy seeing Tony and crew making guest appearences in your Furio stories tho (Hint to put them in more often) haha!
    I think of all your Soprano's stories I like Collections the best because it seems like a real Soprano's episode. Keep up the good work!
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  • From ANON - Kamikazi on November 11, 2006
    Hi Kanashii-
    I REALLY enjoy your Soprano's stories and I think they are fantastic. I notice with this one especially there are a lot of minor grammatical errors in it and also if you look at the story as a whole (Since you mentioned that Guarentor, Collections and this one are sort of interconnected) there are some small inconsistancies and incontinuity in the stories (IE: Maria/Marie and Sophia getting mixed up, or some of Charlene/Aria's past getting mixed up) but please don't be offended! I am just offering some constructive criticism instead of the usual "Oooh, I love it!" (Which I DO but I think that an author of your caliper and talent would also appreciate honesty as well. I know I do!)
    Overall, I really love your Soprano's stories. I think you capture the flair of the characters and such from the show very well and I also really, really love your storytelling abilities and authors voice. Always your stories have a well rounded plot, character development and a writing style that truly draws in the reader. You really seem to know your stuff on the mafia and organized crime and it really shows in your stories. They are both compelling, enthralling, give you some chills at their dark deeds but also really make you understand the characters.
    I think a beta reader would really help in grammatical or continuity errors you have because I know it can be hard for an author to beta their own work. But again, please don't let my suggestions keep you from your truly wonderful writing. I still give this story an "11" on a scale of 1 to 10 and I look forward to much more of your work.

    KAMIKAZI

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  • From ANON - Sopranofan on April 19, 2006
    Yeah! Glad to see some Soprano fics finally. Do some more pleeze! More Furio and maybee some on how he does enforcements or whatever? I'm glad you did not do Carmella in the story, I just could not see those two ever together. Furio's a hottie that's for sure! There are some fanfics of Soprano's on FF, but I like yours better!
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  • From ANON - Silvio on April 11, 2006
    Really great story lady! I've read your other stuff before but this has a bit different flavor. You did a good job of catching some of the personalities of the Soprano's characters, especially Paulie Walnuts. I know your story isn't obviously canon of how Furio left from the series but I think it's something I could really visualize. You really write well about the Organized Crime lifestyle, you really should try and get published if your not already. You'd be the next Puzo!
    It was interesting as well the backstory of Furio and the people back in Napoli, I can tell you've done your research well, nice to see someone knows the difference between the La Cosa Nostra and the Camorra! I really liked Valerio, Salvatore and Don Turi they were well written characters. Keep up the great work!
    Silvio
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  • From ANON - TonysGirl on April 11, 2006
    Oh my God!!! Finally a Soprano's story, with Furio. Have you ever written professional mafia books because this stuff is great. I loved the whole details and descripions of the Camorra in Italy, and the characters in it, includining the secondary characters. You just keep coming out with better and better ideas and twists on each chapter, man this should seriously be a novel! I have seen your Caziano stories as well but this is simply stunning work! PLEASE, PLEASE, PLEASE write more Soprano's stories, or at least more Furio stories. Thanks for this gem!
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