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Reviews for Angel In His Eyes

By : edoxroyfan
  • From Siarra on September 21, 2006
    Wow, this is one story that goes deep. It's obvious that you've spent a great deal of time studying these characters and adding your own touch to it. The story flows wonderfully, the general ambience to it is very touching and thought-inspiring, and it's very well written; its descriptions are well placed but there isn't too much small detail to hinder the great pacing. The only complaint I have is that there are quite a few misspellings, which tend to disrupt the story every now and then.
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  • From ANON - kos on September 04, 2006
    Well, I don't have any flames. The idea of House/Wilson intrigues me. More on that in a sec.

    I'd suggest you proof-read and edit the existing story; the misspelled words were a bit distracting. The writing itself was just fine, however; if it wasn't, I wouldn't have read it.

    I think you've got a keen insight into their very complex and odd relationship. I've been catching up on seasons One and Two in preparation for the season Three premier (tomorrow!), and I'm still not confident enough to write House, let alone Wilson, Cuddy, et al.

    Okay, the fascination about House and Wilson... when I first saw this pair, I squicked. I'm not really much into slash. But on "In the Actor's Studio," and audience member asked Hugh Laurie about any potential romance coming down the piek between House and Cameron, House and Cuddy... or even (half-jokingly) House and Wilson. He said, Who knows? Maybe all three! (Paraphrasing from memory, btw). I was like, WHAT??

    So yeah, Hugh Laurie himself put the idea out there. Then soon after I saw the ep where Wilson temporarily moves in with House, and what happens? House deliberately deletes a phone message to Wilson (while he lay sleeping on the couch) about an apartment that's come available. I was like, Hmmmm... maybe there IS something to this! I can't wait to learn more in season Three, I tell ya!

    Nice effort. Keep up the good work, and I'll be sure to scope out any other stories you might have.
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  • From LittleLynn on September 04, 2006
    I demand you write more, now. OR ELSE!!!!
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  • From AshtonRose on September 03, 2006
    Holy cow, that was really good 0_o I'm not familiar with the show, but you really gave me a feel of what these two would be like together. I like the descriptions and the flow of it; despite what you said, it's really good! And I still don't know HOW I inspired you to write the ending, lol. But anywho, yet another awesomely written piece; I can't give enough praise for your writing. Keep it up! . . . or else *evil laugh*
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