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Reviews for Dean's True Love

By : Foxfyre
  • From pontaloon on July 18, 2009
    i find that this fic wasn't very realistic. not that i don't think that Dean could have a daughter and fall in love with his brother and kill ghouls easily and all that, hell it could happen. i just feel that the way you write about it is like you're trying to paint a eutopic view of a chaotic situation. it just doesn't work. there should be more of a development as far as Dean dealing with his feelings for Sam. i'm not saying you have to jump into the whole 'but he's my brother and i'm not even gay' melodrama. just show that it has been a really dificult thing for him to deal with and that he's had to think about it alot, instead of seeing his bro for the first time in who knows how long and immidiately sleeping with him as if there was nothing wrong with that. as far as i'm concerned, there IS nothing wrong with that, but im not Dean. all in all, the characterization needs a little work.
    Anyhooooo, as far as raw materials (like the general idea, the plotline the twist at the end I REALLY WASN'T EXPECTING THAT!^^) it's all really well done! this has the potential of being an amazing story, just needs some refining
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  • From ANON - Alexis on October 14, 2006
    *Angry mob with torches* UP-DATE! UP-DATE! UP-DATE!

    In all seriousness, a wonderful bit of Wincest. I look forward to future chapters! :)
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  • From ANON - Werewolve on September 19, 2006
    This story is really good. Can you please add more.
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