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Reviews for Burden

By : EvilE
  • From firemaiden04 on January 17, 2012
    Fantastic! Believable dialogue, well suited to the characters. Extremely hot.
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  • From pepperstasiabeaverhausen on March 29, 2010
    Great Story! Nice use of imagery, and the sex was hot without being cheesecake, which I like. Keep up the awesome work!
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  • From IlDolceSuono on September 26, 2009
    1. That disclaimer is far too hilarious. You should take it down at once to stop innocent viewers from choking on their lunches -cough cough cough-

    2. I LOVE Stabler and Benson. Love them. And it was cool that you took a scene from the show and enhanced it. You're clearly a fan who knows what she's doing. Argh (reference 'pirate' in your name)

    3. Overall, good. Sensual which is exactly how I always imagined they'd be.
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  • From Seraphis on September 01, 2009
    well. holy jesus. if i wore glasses, they'd be steamed.
    you know you're good at this.
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  • From ANON - Rose on March 07, 2009
    Great interlude... very nicely done.
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  • From ANON - Tasha on March 14, 2008
    I have to say it was wonderful to read an Olivia/ Elliot story. There are very few of them. You write Elliot and Olivia so well and I love the roughness of Elliot. Sorry if I'm rambling, but I hope that you are able to write a sequel to this story where the two actually go to Elliots house. The idea of it is extremely interesting. Thanks for a great story!
    Tasha
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  • From LittleMissWolfie on January 17, 2008
    it was good i liked it, i hope you add another chapter
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  • From ANON - Liv on December 20, 2007
    ...wow.... normally, I'm really not a fan of pairings on shows, but 'Liv's and El's UST is blatant, and you just took that and ran with it in the best way ever. I never thought I would actually like a story about a pairing, especially one of my favorite shows. Wonderful piece! This is going in my bookmarks!
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  • From ladieaj on October 14, 2007
    Very well-written and in-character. I loved it.
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  • From Tiger5913 on August 10, 2007
    Sequel, sequel, please! This was great! :D I would've liked them to have their first time in a bed, but eh, I guess they can improvise, heh.
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  • From ANON - helen on June 15, 2007
    Ohhh yeah! HOT! Always wanted a take on the verdict - other than my own - and a resolution? to the UST that I saw - or wishful thinking - between them. Well written too! Very in character, sex scene was like I said HOT without being mushy or using more words than needed. Thanks for writing and sharing your story.
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  • From ANON - Brooke on May 28, 2007
    Wow. That was magnificent. I loved the building up tension before the kisses, the passion described so perfectly during the kisses and foreplay, the way you kept them so true to character. Wonderful job.
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  • From jaed621 on February 12, 2007
    Great job, really, it felt very much like them and very hot HOT HOT!
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  • From ANON - Giwu1412 on December 27, 2006
    Mmmm, I have just started reading SVU fics and this one was great!
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  • From ANON - alyssa on November 07, 2006
    omg, that was sooo spot on. i loved it. one of the best svu fics i've ever read.
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