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Reviews for Jimmy

By : banryu942
  • From websurffer on February 13, 2007
    I gotta say, that was possibly the most confusing scene ever. I'll even break down where I was confused for you.

    Pressing Wilson tightly against the glass door, he slid into him. (But then...)
    Grinning, Wilson slid his leg in between House’s and slid it up and down at an agonizingly slow pace. Growling, House rammed into Wilson. (Isn't he already there? and is it even physically possible to slide a leg between another's when they have their dick up your bum?)

    Flicking his tongue into it, his spit filled it full and he ran his tongue further down. (Cause spit-filled belly buttoms are jsut ever so sexy...in loony land maybe. Defintiely a no for realism)

    House’s mouth enveloped the younger man’s length. Wilson moaned as he felt a tongue being prodded into his tight entrance. (So apparently Wilson's dick is hotwired into his ass and whatever happens to on place he feels on the other. Cause I could have sworn you said that House's mouth was more in the cock-wards directon.)

    Exhausted, they leaned into the warmth of the other’s body and sighed, content. As Wilson’s hands ran rhythmic strokes through his love’s hair, their breathing slowed and they slowly drift into unconsciousness, lying in each other’s arms. (And now they are unconscious, in a shower. They're gonna drown because they had sex in the shower and didn't turn it off. How embarassing. House's ghost is going to haunt you.)
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  • From ANON - Anon on January 05, 2007
    I liked the intial interaction with Wilson and House, but I didn't really like the way Cameron changed the dynamics.

    Also, it just is easier to read if you double space between paragraphs.
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