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Reviews for Love Betrayed

By : vinsmouse
  • From ANON - Luke on July 10, 2007
    Hey, the thing didn't let me review at first, and now its some since and Im tired, but it was a great chapter, and my only complaints is that it ended. Im really glad hat Bo forgave Luke though, that boy is beating himself up pretty bad for it. It was a real sweet ending.

    take care now, hugs; JOhn
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  • From ANON - John on June 09, 2007
    Great story, would try to make a great review, but I'm a bit to tired. was a great chapter though, with plenty of greatendess. Hmm, Luke getting classicall 'crowd talking' movie acting. Wonder if that really works. Not surprised Ledbetter was talking, when ain't he?

    Gonna be intersting there, and I'd take a crankshaft to that fella if ya let me into his cel......

    Hugs; John
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  • From ANON - jj on May 06, 2007
    Great chapter!!!
    But your just plain evil. I can't wait to read the next chapter.
    Please post soon real soon.
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  • From ANON - John on May 06, 2007
    See what you mean about the cliff hanger, hey, if we take Cliff, and take him to a cliff, we could have us a real dandy Cliff hanger....... ;)Shouldn't be no problem getting that fella now, if he survives Luke, and that might be kinda tricky.

    It was a real good chapter, real good. Take care now, *hugs*
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  • From ANON - John on April 10, 2007
    OKay, now what did you do that for, its all going so nice, and then the chapter ends, that really aint fair you know, I wanted to keeep on reading, what kind of Uncle does that, end the chapter before I wanna stop readining, huh? Wait till I tell Uncle Jesse..........

    Great chapter, fat marshemloow, wont hurt him much........ Go ahead Luke, put him on a stick and hold him over the fire some, ought to be fun.

    It was a real good chapter, a litte of it seems headed in the right direction, the rest seems like some people could use a map. And someone ouught to install a vent on Luke, funny how they say Bo has the hotest temper, he might, But Luke is more devestating.

    Take care now, huge hugs
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  • From ANON - John on March 19, 2007
    awsome chapter, like the way Cooter talked wtih Bo, he really knew what he was doing, and wanted to help them, though I wonder how he will be with Luke. I think he's right though, Bo want to get it back, but it won't be easy, and Luke's gonna have to work for it, though I know he'd never do anything to hurt him on purpose.

    Great chater, hugs,
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  • From ANON - jj on March 05, 2007
    Great chapter!!! I hope bo and luke can work this out.
    At times you just want to wrap your arms around them and
    hold them. Then you justwant to beat there heads together.
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  • From ANON - John on March 03, 2007
    Sweet chapter in it's own way. Feel as much sorry for Bo and Luke, that boy really don't know how to work out any problems, and Bo can't handle any mistakes, and that was a big one. In a certain way understandable, but still a big one.

    Poor Luke, all hung over and sleepwalking, Well, you know, if anyone can work up to regain that trust, it will be him......

    Hugs, John
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  • From ANON - Luke on February 20, 2007
    awsome chapter, lotsa stuff going on, an' that angsty, don't think Luke is going to be sleeping much better than Bo would in there, he's suffering to. Feel sorry for both boys, can understand that is pretty tricky, but hey, you pulled off Uncle Jesse remeber, you're doing great.

    hugs, Luke
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  • From ANON - jj on February 20, 2007

    I think you did a great job on this chapter, bit please don't make us wait so long.
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  • From ANON - jj on February 08, 2007
    I'm glad Luke finally learned the truth.
    I hope he and Bo can work things out.
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  • From ANON - Luke on February 08, 2007
    he did describe him as lover, so I reckon they are gonna be alright, as soon as the author and the Muse gets eough angst that is. But I dont believe the word lover would have been used if that wasn't is, so I'm haning on to see what happens next.

    hugs, Luke
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  • From ANON - jj on January 29, 2007
    I wish Luke would have let Bo explain what happen.


    good story. I can't wait to read the next chapter.
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  • From ANON - Luke on January 28, 2007
    Well, I can sure see why you think everyone will be surprised. Very intteresting plot there, I find it very interesting. I keep telling you Luke has some serious issues about anger.... It's not like its a normal reaction for him to make his cousin missrable, and he's not one to take revenge on people as such, but Luke hurt and angry, thats a Luke who aint got a clue what he is doing. He dont have as much judgment as even the tiniest turnip.

    That fella was smart to catch on so quick though. What Boss Hogg did to get Bo there and willing, and that is something I wish Luke would find out about, He woud give Boss what he had coming for it.

    Not sure what Luke will do to himself when he finds out Bo was being used though, that is one boy gonna hate himself for what he came to do.

    It was a great chatper, take care now, hugs, Luke
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  • From ANON - Elenhin on January 13, 2007
    well, it could be good eyes, and it could be bad, and it could be a polecat, or some animal. Poor Bo, Rosco just wanted to blame something on him, normally someone driving someone elses car there would be assumed he had borrowed it, or was doing someone a favour, poor Duke boys,

    and hey, this one I can type iwthout thte IM going of, interesting... ;)

    It was a great chapter, loved the way Bo went up to the loft and Luke went after., Hugs, Luke
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