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By : Faith5x5
  • From ANON - Lucy on September 29, 2010
    Fantastic story. Just two things - you mean "vulnerable", not "venerable", and "manner" not "manor". Very well written, and you are one of my favourite authors - I've been seeking out your other fics.
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  • From ANON - Edgebunny on June 17, 2010
    Thank you for this! I'm new to the fandom and was desperately trying to find some decent Gibbs/Ziva fiction and was coming up short everywhere I went! I was about to give up when I found this. Now I'm going to go read everything else you have written on here for the pairing. lol.
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  • From thebullygetsthegirlifheisjames on December 22, 2009
    Fun fic :-)
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  • From Adrianna on December 29, 2008
    I love it please update ;)
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  • From ANON - Cina on December 12, 2008
    Nobody's reviewed this? For shame.

    Overall, quite good, a lot of fun to read. I have just a couple of suggestions; first, in chapter five, I believe the word you're looking for is "wainscoting, " not "Wayne's coating." I'm assuming spellcheck is to blame for that, as well as in chapter seven, "very slow and painful manor" - I believe you were looking for "manner, " there.

    Right, I'm off to browse the rest of your stories. Keep up the good work!

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