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Reviews for Freefall

By : VZG
  • From StormWolfstone on May 16, 2009
    It's so pleasant to see a fanfiction written in such a well done manner. It's a nice surprise to be able to read and be drawn in, but not only that, no once did I trip over any wordings used or feel a need to break away. It was well done and the build up through the sections from beginning to end was superb. It was especially nice to be able to note that there was not an overuse of certain terms as there often are in so many slash fics.

    I certainly intend to check out other things you've written and I believe wholeheartedly if you applied the same basic concepts in an original piece of fiction you could find yourself published. Have a great day!
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  • From FlamesEmbrace on September 16, 2007
    Damn, that was an enjoyable story. I loved how it moved, I loved all the subtexts and the themes and the lovely humor you put in it. They fell in love so delightfully realistically and the ending was... sexy. =3 I've been enjoying a lot of your fiction; you're a wonderful writer!
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  • From ANON - SesshomarusSecret on January 30, 2007
    I really enjoyed how this story moved. So many authors have their characters in love by paragraph three or sooner! Rather annoying that. You're good writer, I look forward to your next story. Perhaps a sequel?
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