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Reviews for Across the lines

By : Leni
  • From ANON - josh on May 26, 2008
    love it!

    update soon please

    you have a really good story forming here and i would love to see what you have instore!

    looking forward to your update =)
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  • From ANON - brayzen on November 05, 2007
    soo good, your ability to capture the characters is astonishing. (are you secretly a script writer out for jollies):) please continue..i want no I NEED to know what happens!!!!
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  • From kourya on September 09, 2007
    I just read the first chapter and I think it's pretty good, so I hope you continue with more chapters! I have yet to read the next 2, so I hope they're just as interesting. You do really well with characterization and body language, so it's easy to picture. Nice job.

    ~ Nakourya
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  • From ANON - Drew on August 07, 2007
    Pleeeeeeeeeeease, next chapter!
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  • From ANON - Bethany on May 02, 2007
    Hi-
    That was such an awesome story! Please update soon!!
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  • From ANON - Richese on March 21, 2007
    Great History!!! Give us more
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  • From ANON - SinstralPride on March 21, 2007
    I don't even watch Grey's Anatomy and i love this story! I must have MORE!!! Please? i'll check back! It's great that you didn't just jump right to the steamier stuff, I really enjoy the lead up and introduction to what is going on... not that PWP doesn't have it's high points! I like where you're going with this, humanizing the characters and giving them motivation. Great job, keep it up!
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  • From ANON - A fan on February 14, 2007
    Write more
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  • From ANON - Anon on February 02, 2007
    Very very good. I love the story so far, please update soon!
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  • From ANON - jayjay on January 31, 2007
    OMG yes. they need to have sex now
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