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Reviews for First Bite

By : DJRocca
  • From queen-of-secrets on September 08, 2012
    i loved it perfect combination of funny cute and extremly hot very good job you always have a way with chip/vida it's a shame you write about them anymore i know you probably don't have time for me to bother you but it's just that i'd love to read if you wrote anything about them on here or FF and i really think you should since not many people write about them or well like them and you make really good stories so try to give it a shot please?
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  • From sheraven on June 19, 2007
    That is perfect! Exactly how I would imagine them on the floor of the club. How appropriate that Chip is not wierded out by Vida's need to bite, but turned on by it. You are good.
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  • From Barrie on June 09, 2007
    Again very hot. Cute, some grammer and spelling errors, but no biggee and with more practice you can only get better. (hint, hint)
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  • From LadyofTheWhiteWater on April 19, 2007
    Well done! Funny and sweet and hot all wrap into one fic. Good work, DJ. Cannot wait until your next fic.
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