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Reviews for Getting Through Another Night

By : NoHayRemedio
  • From ANON - diane on April 25, 2007
    this is very good story; i especially liked sara's flashback to visiting her mother in mental hospital. i remember something sara said in the 'committed' episode, paraphased "this place smells like lies", anyway, i think you picked up on that with the flashback scene with the social worker.

    btw: the multiple orgasms WOW.

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  • From ANON - JMc. on April 25, 2007
    I really liked this story and how it weaves the series episode 'Committed' into your own story. The sex is very hot and believable between two people who have loved each other for a long time, you have interpreted Gil and Sara's personailties within the story very well without changing who they are for the sake of the story alone. One minor point is, some of the more 'medical' type terms for the body can be as awkward as some of the more raunchy language. Using words like 'underarm','butt' or 'ass' might bother some folks, to be honest terms like 'axilla' or 'gluteal muscles' tends to cause a slight hitch in what is a wonderful telling of sexual passion. If you want to e-mail me, I know of a book that is actually an erotic thesaurus. I'm not kidding, they do exist anad ever since the PC police made publishers clean up language in most dictionaries and thesaurus out there, it's difficult to find suitable language for any writer to be inspired. Again, a truly lovely and passionate story definately well told by a writer with much talent and promise. Love to read more of your work.
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