Click Here!

  • 1

Reviews for In the Air Tonight

By : SpecialFX
  • From ANON - michelann on June 03, 2012
    What the seven sphinctors of Hell, there better be more!?!? This was just getting really good. Have I told you before I love your writing. It is so hard to write good erotica...this is great!
    Report Review

  • From ANON - Anon on April 09, 2011
    why does ch 3 switch tenses halfway though?
    Report Review

  • From sonserae89stinson on May 19, 2009
    i really hope you continue this story i am a huge fan of firefly and i have been waiting for mal and inara to get it on.
    Report Review

  • From ANON - Nibiki on October 20, 2008
    Ohhhh, that was hot! More please!
    Report Review

  • From ANON - harpling on January 31, 2008
    Well, the characterizations are pretty god, and the story is nice. However, I really think you need to spend some time proofreading before you post anything else. The open-ended quoatation marks, the misspellings, the pronoun confusion, and the verb tense shifts all make for a very confusing read. My advice is to find a good beta reader and have him or her check everything thoroughly. Also, the Chinese expletives seem over-used, as if you wrote everything else and then added them in just for the sake of atmosphere. Try using them less, only when they fit in with the dialogue or the story. Otherwise, good job.
    Report Review

  • From Gertie on January 14, 2008
    Please write more soon. This story is addictive and I can't wait to find out what happens next.
    Report Review

  • From AletaRois on December 26, 2007
    I'm really looking forward to the rest of this story! Please continue.
    Report Review

  • From Aydrian on December 23, 2007
    Pretty good so far. I'd like to see more as soon as possible. :)
    Report Review

  • 1
T.O.S. | Content Guidelines | DMCA Info | F.A.Q. | Facebook | Tumblr | Abuse | Support | Contact | Donate

Click Here!