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Reviews for Nocturnal

By : dragonfall
  • From bloodravyn on September 12, 2009
    please post more of this soon!!!
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  • From on April 28, 2009
    truly amazing! you are a wonderful writer. i am very much amazed and impressed. your poetry with River's thoughts is beautiful, and the the change in narrative voice when moving between characters is flawless. I can't gush enough. I see you haven't written in a while but I surely hope you come back to this story. your skill at vocalizing River is too good to let go. I can't wait to read more, you are a truly gifted writer.
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  • From Psychosomatic on February 15, 2009
    Whoops, I got so caught up I forgot to elaborate 8D
    Your characterization of River is really fascinating, as is the dance between Simon, Kaylee, and River. Simon and River have such a strong bond, and this is a great fic to explore that. River sure is crafty, and that makes it fun. Beautifully written. I hope there'll be some more chapters?
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  • From Psychosomatic on February 15, 2009
    What a great story!
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  • From Lizardking01200 on January 06, 2009
    great read, very intense. please please continue
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  • From drmsr on August 15, 2008
    Ah great story :) I really like the flow of events can't wait for the next chapter
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  • From Wistfu1Stargazer on July 22, 2008
    Well written--too bad River wasn't allowed to act on her urges more often, LOL.
    ;~P
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  • From Aydrian on January 14, 2008
    Good chapter. Nice to see that Simon isn't losing sleep anymore. I wonder what fun River will have next. ;)
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  • From Aydrian on January 09, 2008
    Not bad. Your writing style is interesting. Please continue soon.
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