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Reviews for We Are Plural, We Are Single

By : roguebitch
  • From ANON - jewel on November 02, 2014
    You are a very talented writer. This is well written. You have a great way of packing a lot of meaning and feeling, getting across emotions, concepts, moods even scenery in very brief concentrated language - small groups of sentences and just right phrases. There is no waste of words in this. I found the boys' personalities were very true to canon. The dialogue and phrasing were dead on. We don't get a real picture of Sam's introspection on the show, but i feel what you've given him here is plausible and fits him well. There is a lot of duality in this story which i suppose is good seeing as the title itself is dualistic. You thread that theme throughout the entirety of the story beginning with Sam analyzing the differences between himself and Dean in regards to picking up women. You have Sam compare their differences on several topics outlining how different they are but then give reason, logical understandable reason of why they love each other, why they can find it ok to be with each other namely emphasizing their weird life growing up and current lifestyle. Again you bring in that duality by having Sam contrast this with life at Stanford. I could go on and mention every dualistic spot in the story, but i would be just iterating what you probably know since well, you wrote it and seemingly deliberately.

    I also wanted to mention that your story construction was good: starting the cases with a small yet fitting and meaningful description of the day or the town/scenery. Then the case, punctuated with mealtime and motel time. I very much liked the detail of specific real place towns and mention of how far apart they are, driving home to the reader exactly how much time they spend on the road. I have to ask - was going to the House on the Rock a nod towards Gaiman's "American Gods"? or to the Trickster episode Mystery Spot (which i also believe is in "American Gods")? Also, being from New England myself i loved Dean's comment about needing leave because they could spend their life there with all the supernatural shit going on. yes New England is indeed ripe with haunted, scary and creepy. Vampires too lol. Mercy Brown and HP Lovecraft from RI - do i need mention more?

    Anyway, sorry for the long review. Truly, thank you for writing and posting. And i'll leave you with the comment fan fiction writers get very often - please continue this!! (i'd really love to see the boys get to the physical "cleaving" of their relationship. And maybe a better use of those cuffs. )
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  • From wolfwitch on February 25, 2012
    I loooooved the story! Really sweet and angsty, just what I was looking for. I thought that San Antonio was in Texas, not New Mexico, though.
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  • From CandyCakes on February 08, 2012
    I've only just started to get into Supernatural and this is my first attempt at reading Wincest fiction. Honestly I thought this fic was lovely, just as long as it needed to be. Their interaction was exactly how I imagined it would be if their relationship was cannon. I really enjoyed this story and it made me want to read more Supernatural fiction.
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  • From ANON - Anon on December 12, 2008
    Absolutely loved this story, you're a pro.
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  • From ANON - Anon on January 27, 2008
    Wow...Fucking amazing.
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  • From charlie on January 21, 2008
    i really loved this. the characters are portrayed so perfectly and the flow and development of their relationship feels really natural. beautifully written.
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