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Reviews for Dealbreaker

By : Johnnyjosh
  • From ANON - mel storm on April 11, 2009
    I beg you to finish it! COME ON ya cant leave your devoted readers out to dry like that. (grant i this is my first review- BUT ONLY because it was so good from start to this point that i just continued on reading and would give you a big bang of a review at the end. cant do that unless you finish. so i vote FINISH!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!

    peace

    mel storm

    ps: feel free to email me back.
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  • From TokiMirage on January 17, 2009
    Dude. Who cares about CANON? I've read a lot of sweet AU fics. Please update again soon!!! ^^
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  • From ANON - Anon on December 21, 2008
    Hey... where in the hell xD is the rest of your story? It's goood, I like it! Please say you'll write more. AU or not AU it doesn't matter, the story's hot.
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  • From Shivawn on December 09, 2008
    Haha! I haven't even finished with Season 1 of Supernatural (which I guess I read the spoilers but still...lol), none the less seeing the shows finale so by all means, turn it into AU! Anyways, I like original works when it comes to...'fanfictions' (television, anime/manga, stuff like that). I love to see people's imaginations and MAN YOURS IS GREAT! I LOVE IT! I can't wait for the story to unravel some more. :D It's so exciting!!!! So umm...update as soon as you can because I really want to see how things turn out. And, having an actual Supernatural STORY to read...multi-chapter story is just WONDERFUL! I love smexy oneshots, don't get me wrong...but I also like to read some stuff with plot, too. :D Plot AND smexiness all in one? Hellz yeah! TOTAL BONUS! So, I really can't wait to read more of your story.

    By the way, I have put it under my recommended reading. If you have a mailing list for updates and stuff, I'd like to be on it :)
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  • From ANON - Crystal on November 18, 2008
    Please continue! I will definitly read it. Thats the best part aboyt any FF, the ability to make it how you want.
    Crystal
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  • From pontaloon on October 02, 2008
    i normally dont like OC female characters but in this case, i actually like the succubus! she forces two hot men to have sex and is going to awaken Sam's powers, how could you not like her! i dont particularly care if it goes AU as long as Sam gets uber powerful! and theres lots of sex (...not hetero onegai^^)
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  • From ANON - Lah on September 24, 2008
    I just have to say that the sex in this piece was steamy and I would still follow no matter what you did with it. I have been on the edge of my seat for an update so I hope that you follow your instincts and there's more feeding on Dean ahead.
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  • From Birddi on September 15, 2008
    If there's smut I don't think most would mind.
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  • From ANON - Carcharodon on September 12, 2008
    I really enjoyed the story!!! It's really good and "in character".
    You know, I don't think you should go on as AU. I think you can continue without making it AU.
    You just need to wait until the Season 4 starts (and see whats happend). According to the synopsis, we'll get Dean back, nobody knows how.
    Ok, your demon didn't break his deal, but 1)Demons can lie:) 2)Dean will be freed from hell, so maybe she managed to come up with something?
    Anyway, for now, you're somewhere near "Sin City", so you have plently of time to play:)
    And your story is really very delicios:)
    So keep on writing, let the demon have something on your mind (maybe it was her who helped to free Sam's powers so he was able to hold back Lilit?). By the time you get to the end ot the Season 3, you've already got some info from the 4, so I think you can do some great story without making the AU.
    (Sorry for any mistakes, English is not my native).
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  • From ANON - Anon on September 01, 2008
    I think AU would be the way to go. I have read a lot of fanfiction and AU fics can sometimes be better that things that go with canon.
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  • From RugbyGod on September 01, 2008
    I would be completely okay if you decided to go into an AU. I would absolutely keep reading!
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  • From ANON - Ladynight on August 30, 2008
    I would read this story if it was au. I really enjoy this story and would hate to see it stop.
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  • From riddlestar on April 15, 2008
    this is amazingly well written with solid plot... i love it!
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  • From ANON - shana on April 14, 2008
    Hey, just wanted to let you know I'm really enjoying this story =) I can't wait to find out what happens next! Quick question: how could Sam leave the motel room (after Dean went to get breakfast) when they salted the place? Okay no, I guess Dean could've moved the salt when he opened the door, expecting Sam to put it back. Hah, answered my own question. Well, I'm really interested in seeing how this is going to play out, so please keep writing! Thanks for the story ^_^
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  • From RugbyGod on March 23, 2008
    I hope you update sooner. I love your writing. You're really talented.
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