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Reviews for Unwilling Obedience

By : Shadowflare
  • From ANON - ninesenshi on November 03, 2012
    Just finished chap 5, have been enjoying the story allot. It always feels pointless to comment on a story from years before when the author has moved on but...
    You keep trumpeting about `Chloe' Chloe`;what's so great about Chloe? Do you have a Chloe fetish? Most people think Lana is MUCH hotter, and she is the reason I started on this fic. I'll see where you are going with it but the constant `Chloe' forecasts are weird. Also, I get it, no incest with Chloe/Lana. I guess Kara who has no problems with rape and blackmail would draw the line hard at incest. It's not a problem if you don't want to include that stuff, but no need to harp on it.
    Otherwise a very nice fic.
    SailorNemesis
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  • From ANON - Anon on March 15, 2012
    excellent story r u updating anytime soon

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  • From LstCryptonian on June 02, 2011
    getting time my foot, its been two years and you totaly forgot about this awesome story. how could you, seriously you said youd update and I've been returning every so often to check. ive had different names though
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  • From JohnSlayer on May 11, 2009
    This is such an awesome fic! You simply NEED to continue this!!
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  • From JohnSlayer on March 25, 2009
    WOOOHOOO!!! I love this chapter!!! GO Lana!! Totally awesome! I love the move to Chloe's apartment! You have me patiently waiting for your next very important chapter 14!
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  • From ThereIsNoSpoon on March 09, 2009
    That was just awesome.

    It was good that the table has been turned on Kara. Now she will know what it's like to be truely dominated.

    Looking forward to reading Chapter 13.
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  • From Merlinius on March 09, 2009
    Keep it cumming ;-)
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  • From JohnSlayer on March 09, 2009
    I love it!!! Hey, what about Kara/Tess?
    Not that this is bad, this fic is totally awesome, with or without Tess lol!
    It has a good portion of my Kara, something other fics really lack!
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  • From JohnSlayer on February 24, 2009
    I totally love it. It gets better and better with every chapter!!!! Blue Kryptonite! Yikes!! LOL! Cannot wait for the next one which is your fave :)


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  • From JohnSlayer on February 13, 2009
    I spurted cum all over the place while reading the latest chapter! OMG! I LOVE IT!!!
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  • From Merlinius on February 11, 2009
    More. The feetplay was ick, but the shower was great 9/10
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  • From afterglow on February 05, 2009
    I truly love this story, it's so hot! the chlana storyline is great, I hope they will admit to themselves that they like having sex with each other and I hope they will admit having feelings in the future, why not? ^^ keep writing !
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  • From JohnSlayer on February 03, 2009
    I totally loved this last chapter!!! AWESOME!
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  • From Merlinius on January 21, 2009
    Yum, I loved the Chloe and Lana stuff best. 9/10 for both parts.
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  • From JohnSlayer on January 20, 2009
    My god, I totally love this story! Awesome chapter!!!
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