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Reviews for Enslaving Elliot

By : MTL
  • From ANON - Adi on April 16, 2013
    I know it's old, but I had to say that this is not only the best Jordan/Elliot Elliot/Other fic I've read, but one of the best D/s fics I've read in a long long time. I just discovered this story but I'm sure I'm going to be reading it many many times.
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  • From stevemorgan on October 22, 2011
    reread this a second time, fantastic love some more

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  • From SapphicRobot on August 25, 2011
    Adding Denise and/or (preferably and) Lucy is a MUST
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  • From stevemorgan on January 31, 2010
    still love this, cant wait for next chapter
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  • From stevemorgan on January 09, 2010
    this is great, i love this pairing, jordan is a great dom, and elliot a great suband the relationship between the two has been excelently handled, most writers on here knock the fight out of there subs too soon, this makes it much more interesting then dull sex scene after sex scene, when you brought in carla i admit i was worried usually these strys on this site just become lets make every character a dom and have another sex scene and i lose interest with this wow, it has actually brought in a new dynamic and you cant help feeling that at the moment elliot would be happier with carla, could this actually be a triangle and actually a story development, i do hope so keep up the good work
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  • From ANON - K on January 05, 2010
    You are absolutely amazing! Your writing is absolutely top notch and I can literally feel every emotion depicted in your story! I'm current on chapter three and whe I read Elliot exclaiming to dr cox about sex with Jordon my heart stopped. For a moment I literally felt the depictions of the characters coming alive in my mind as if it was actually the tv show. I just had to tell you asap how much I absolutely adore your work. I'm not sure if this story is done but I hope it is, and if not I hope you finish it! Your biggest fan, K.
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  • From ANON - Lexy on December 06, 2009
    I really love this story. I hope you update soon. One thing, though (just for consideration). If someone is really fucked up and enjoying it, they would be panting, crying, moaning, and naturally, they can't easily speak. So you might want to make the people (especially Elliot) have a difficulty in talking during the naughty sex I enjoy so much. Update soon! I just discover your works and the kinkiness is making me drool for more.
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  • From ANON - D on November 29, 2009
    So hot! Love the domination, the hints into Elliott's psyche. Delicious. Hoping that Jordan doesn't just discard her though..
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  • From Galactus on June 25, 2009
    Oh my god! I can't believe there's more chapters to this! The first alone fit so much domination and unbelievable mind fuckery that I couldn't conceive that this story could be sexually expanded. I'm thrilled to be wrong. Great job capturing the voices of Elliot and Jordan and lovely little tidbits of nasty ass description ("fuck pad" particularly). Can't wait to read more!
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  • From ANON - Bigfan on March 10, 2009
    Awesome read! Are we ever going to get an update? I loved your that 70's show story as well!
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  • From owlmaid on February 08, 2009
    So awesome! I do hope Elliot still has a little fight left and/or makes mistakes...
    I've said this before, but again, it's amazing the way you write the dialogue for the characters. I hope there's more soon!
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  • From ANON - skip765 on January 20, 2009
    Great story, really well thought out and structured, I think you capture the characters excellently, and not to mention really hot! One of the best adult fan fictions I have ever read. Please keep updating!
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  • From owlmaid on January 02, 2009
    You are doing a GREAT JOB. In so many fan fics the authors don't make their characters talk or act like the real ones. Throughout the entire three chapters, every sentence they said, every action, I could see plain as day in my head. PLEASE keep writing!! I would love to see what Jordan does next. . . more spanking, whipping, maybe some good restraints and tickle and more punishment.
    Again, amazing work. It is a great read.
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  • From ANON - James on November 26, 2008
    Simply brilliant. Keep up the good work.
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  • From ANON - Anon on October 22, 2008
    Sexy update, fun story! But please don't stop updating the other stories for this one - I simply like your other stories too much... ;-)
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