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Reviews for Crash and Burn

By : thermitegirl
  • From ANON - Midknight on March 24, 2013
    Nicely done. Good descriptions and pace. Might have needed just a little more set-up, but that's just me. Now, where's the rest?
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  • From ANON - Chaosbleeds on February 25, 2009
    Well written and decisively sexy. Can't wait for it to continue. Good writing!
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  • From Safir84 on December 04, 2008
    Awesome story you've got here so far, I really like it! The plot seems to be pretty good and the character portrayal's pretty great as well. More so Riley is all right in this one, I guess, while Cameron is awesome, hehe! (After all, she's one of my favourite characters, along with John)!

    The fic is also quite well written, which is a big plus (well, for me at least), and the smut was actually very good, cosidering it was one of your earlier attempts!

    Well done! Cannot wait to read more, so please update soon...


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  • From ANON - Mr. Pointy on November 27, 2008
    Love the story so far.

    I'm interested to see what you do with Riley after the reveal in episode 10.
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  • From ANON - david on November 16, 2008
    hey great start to hopefully a long series

    I love this show and the way they seem to building some tension between John and Cam... I can't wait to see what you do with it.

    keep it up!
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  • From Aaronleach45123 on November 10, 2008
    Awesome chapter update soon.
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  • From ANON - Anon on November 06, 2008
    asfasf
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  • From greywolf2700 on November 04, 2008
    C'mon please write another chapter soon. I want to see John finish himself up with Riley and maybe get some from Cameron too.
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  • From on October 30, 2008
    Awesome story update soon. Can't wait for the next chapter.
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  • From ANON - Hi on October 30, 2008
    LOVE it!!
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  • From Borias on October 29, 2008
    Extraordinary, especially for an early effort, but it would stand on it's own nonetheless. It even makes me like Riley, something the actual show can't accomplish :D
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  • From oldwolf on October 29, 2008
    Very good story.

    The lemony section was brief, but very well written, especially for a first attempt.

    Things are looking up for John. I look forward to the next chapter.
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