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Reviews for Dirty Closet

By : Inunaide
  • From ANON - Yvette on January 11, 2010
    Excellent!! I especially liked the end!!!! :D
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  • From ANON - Ville P on April 19, 2009
    Too cute!!! Love tthe end!!!!
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  • From ANON - Melanie on April 10, 2009
    I LOVED this! :D I forgot how much fun House/Wilson really was!
    It took me some time to get used to the use of surnames again, and I was glad you made them say eachother's first names when they were 'there'. Very good. I also loved House's way of thinking! You put it into a story very well! I don't think I could have done that. Ever!

    His embarrassment when his scar became visible was also a very nice detail. It made him very round. Not like he wasn't already, but it showed another aspect of him in this story which I really liked.

    One point of improvement, maybe... I think you explain a bit more than is necessary. There is an overlap between what you write about each character.
    I can't scroll up to copy from the actual story, but I'll write an example for you:
    "...and then he saw the other do this."
    "The other did this, because..."
    That sort of overlap. it's not bothersome, but I don't think it's necessary to do as often as you do it. :) I think the 'flow' of the story would be a bit better if you would try to use that overlap less. It's pretty much the only point of improvement I can think of! :D I LOVED the story, I LOVED the plot, and I loved the ending. It actually made me laugh out loud at my monitor. :D

    I also found a sentence that really stood out, I think:
    "House had closed his eyes, just allowing all his sexual tensions to slowly fade into Wilson’s mouth."
    It's PERFECT and the best line I've seen in a while.
    Keep up your amazing work!
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  • From birdyofthemoongoddess on December 31, 2008
    Mmm!
    Hot, satisfying sex... :) 'Tis good!
    I really liked that last line! :P Cameron and Chase walking in on House and Wilson... *wink* very opposite.

    Your portrayed House and Wilson very well. Very accurate. :) Good job!!
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  • From Ollee on December 22, 2008
    Wow, that was so hot and amazing. I love you.

    And of course they get caught in the act, I was just waiting for someone to show! The last line was particularly hot, I just love this story so much.

    Kudos!
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  • From YamiRynEnjeru on December 19, 2008
    OH MAN =D

    I knew you were writing me something, but something of this sort of epicness was not even considered.

    The smut, my god, the SMUT is delicious and hot and beautiful *fans self* You naughty thing you, and here I never would have thought you'd ever type the word 'cock'. I'm so happy, I could just fuck your brains out with my tongue. And by golly, I just may do that.

    It's quick and messy, but it also has this brilliant sense of plot mingling about that makes my pants ooze with joy. I LOVE IT.

    And it didn't jump right into sex either! Which is lovely in and of itself because I -love- getting into the character's head before hand. And even when things got juicy Wilson remained bushy-browed Wilson and hesitated in an effort to get some sensical matters straightened out. IC pr0n? OYESPLZ =D And in a supply closet? YES. That was brilliant. There's nothing better than wrapping back to canon, the fact Chase & Cameron popped in at the end was what I was totally hoping for just for kicks XD And you supplied, thus making me the happiest YRE on the planet *squiggle*

    I love your descriptors too. There's absolutely just the right about of detail, and then some, that I was practically on sensory overload from the bliss coursing through my body x3 And dirty, oh so dirty indeed. There was some details that made me press my face against the screen just out of the -need- to lap it up and gurgle from orgasmic joy.

    I adore it from top to the rockin' bottom. It wasn't all sparkly or gay in an effort to outshine the point, but had a setting and a reason and character and mouthwatering details that couldn't have possibly been done better and wrapped up so lovingly. I can't even quite pick out my favorite bits. Obviously House licking up Wilson's jizz from his fingers ranks at number one, because sperm loving is just so hot. The giant tennis ball making a cameo also spins me in the right way because I love that ball to bits and pieces because House's hands are always all over it =P And Wilson being such a loud and moany little whore is just asdlkfj;;;HaWt. And the possibility of tension makes me happy because that is how it would go down, and I'm excessively pleased that you focused on that and strung it along till the end where all the uncertainty and awkwardness doesn't simply melt away or settle. It needs talking and 'wtf?' faces, and I see that so well-sprinkled that I want to smuggle it dead with adoration.

    =D

    My incoherent rambling is coming to a close, I swear.

    THANK YOU SO MUCH

    Best FanFic present EVER. And I mean that as honestly as I can mean anything. No one's ever written me something this tasty in all my years of whoring out for decent and pleasing fic just for me.
    If I could show you how happy and -thankful- I am, I'm sure it would be rated X and far, far worse XD

    Of course now that you've raised the bar beyond reach, I hope you don't look at my present to you and hate me D8 I don't think I can reach this level, but damn it all if I won't try! I shall squeeze every last ounce of my love into it until I shrivel and rot, because you deserve it and there's not going around that 8)

    So much love & adoration,

    ~YRE
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