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Reviews for Bitter Destruction

By : CandyCaner
  • From Shawndra on March 29, 2010
    Interesting...piper almost kills an innocent, and the seer we all love to hate is out for a child. I'm humbly awaiting your next installment. This chapter brings in more questions, which keeps readers like myself interested.
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  • From on March 28, 2010
    I'm so happy you updated! I cant believe it took me this long to check back! The wait was totally worth it. I love that Delilah was with Piper when she got her new power. The Doctors appointment was almost worse for Piper than it was finding out the baby was 15 weeks instead of 6. Alright, so it wasn't worse but it was my favorite part for sure lol. I loved both chapters. I loved that Delilah was worried. I loved Piper being with her at the doctor. And Prue saying "Damn" about Piper missing Cole was great! lol. You are great! Cant wait to read more!

    Is it weird that I like Delilah as much as Prue,Piper and Phoebe?
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  • From Shawndra on March 04, 2010
    Hehehe...didn't know I reviewed...or read the same chapter twice. College can make you loose track of everything. On to the critiquing, I am personally looking forward to the conclusion now more than ever. You might have put a little more description into the setting(hospital in particular). I'm sure everyone knows what a hospital looks like, yet for better quality you might have at least described the room. Re(ason being it just seemed like standing in a blank room with nothing there but a bed, ultrasound machine, and story characters. The good points are obviously: the building story line, the regard to keep the original characters in same personality, and the constant throwing me off on what I'd expect the character to do next. Overall, good chapter.
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  • From Shawndra on January 11, 2010
    Chapter was good. I look forward to a climatic ending... I hope to see more action scenes in the future.

    With Much respect,



    The Prince of Madness
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  • From Shawndra on November 15, 2009
    Yeah! Another chapter. Yet, while keeping her personality the same you seemed to have conveyed Delilah's emotions, via pregnancy, very well. I look forward to seeing the seer again. Mainly because she seems to keep me on edge.
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  • From on August 28, 2009
    I missed this! I love all the drama. So many things are going on its hard to focus on just one. Although my favorite pairings are those that have Prue with Piper,Phoebe or Paige, Delilah has me intrigued. When I first started this I wasn't sure how I would like a hole new character. Why make a new one when there are already so many to build onto but in this her and Prue sort of pick up where the other leaves off. You did a great job with that. I'll try to stop rambling now lol. Great fic, please dont keep us waiting to long for the next chapter. Cant wait to read more!
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  • From Shawndra on June 16, 2009
    Ahhhh! Nothing like a mothers love for her child.(hinted sarcasm) I loved the chapter. Keep up the awsome writting.

    With much respect,



    The Price of Madness
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  • From ANON - Denver on June 03, 2009
    Well I love it but enough with the cliffhanger's already haha and I guess you are forgiven once again but pls don't make me wait forever for the next chap lol..........I looked up Ashley Greene and she is alot like how I would imagine Delilah but to be honest I never really pictured a face just other features about her that you described in the story.
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  • From Shawndra on June 02, 2009
    Damn cliff hangers! That was a good chapter. Just curious about something, this isn't going to have the same ending or similer ending as when pheobe was bearing cole's child is it? Seer or someone similer takes her child with magic? well either way I suppose it will be good. Well, I look foward to another good chapter.

    Sincerely,



    The Prince of Madness
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  • From Shawndra on April 26, 2009
    That was a good chapter. What a cliff hanger though. That was harsh. So many questions, how will the charmed ones react to the news, will she keep the baby...I guess I'll have to wait and see. Being able to implant questions into a readers mind is a great techique for an author, which it seems you are fully capiable of doing so.

    Thanks for a great chapter,



    The Prince of Madness
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  • From ANON - Denver on April 13, 2009
    I'm so glad that you are back with writing the story you are forgiven. The story just keeps getting better and better. I can't and see what Piper and Leo's reaction is going to be about the news. Boy what a homecoming.LOL.well enough with my rambling. Just please update soon
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  • From Cadley18 on March 03, 2009
    awww you've really got me hooked on these stories. I hope that their will be another update soon ^^ I'm a sucker for the drama
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  • From Shawndra on February 07, 2009
    How like prue to be so understanding. Now if that had probably been one of the other sisters....well you wouldn't get the same reaction thats for sure. This was a good intro for whats to come. Forshadowing is a good writting technique and you pulled it off. You've got my interest in this story, so please post another chapter to soon. You have definitly earned my seal of approval for this story.

    With much respect,



    The Prince of Madness
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  • From ANON - Sarah on February 04, 2009
    I love this story and where it is going I really hope that it ends with Prue/Delilah still together
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  • From ANON - Denver on February 04, 2009
    Again loved the chapter and thanks for the Prue/Delilah goodness.I can't wait to really see how this story plays out with the baby and all.Well try to update soon
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