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Reviews for Happy Birthday

By : SpecialFX
  • From ANON - JOE on November 18, 2012
    GREAT STUFF .
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  • From on October 16, 2009
    I say continue!!
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  • From ANON - sabrina on September 21, 2009
    that was so hot hot hot!!!
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  • From ANON - Haidyss84 on June 19, 2009
    I love this idea. It makes sense to me as a guy. Why else would he send a hot teenage girl cyborg to protect himself? He probobly had his choice of which he sent to the past and chose her for that very reason.
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  • From mcw14830 on April 14, 2009
    VERY nice! Wonderfully descriptive, excellent narrative, nice style.

    Glad to see this story is continuing.
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  • From ANON - peyaluna on February 03, 2009
    i´m so glad to see that i´m not the only one who has naughty thoughts about a certain smoking hot terminator...i mean, there´s got to be a reason why she´s designed as a female teenager of johns age and not as some overly muscled guy like most of the others ;-)
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  • From ANON - Anon on January 29, 2009
    This is a hot story. Maybr John can explore more of her, like anal or more risque stuff.
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  • From ANON - Nordanvinden on January 05, 2009
    Awesome start (if it do continue), I mean! I really liked it! Great idea and the character description was too, as well the smut, it was very nicly described and very hot! However, I do have one thing to say, concerning the sex scene; it was almost too long, the sexual act I mean, mostly due to the fact that is was his first time, and somehow I don't think that you'd last that long, especially if you're a guy, sorry about that, I don't mean to offened anyone!

    Otherwhise it was pretty damn great and whatnot, lol! More so, it was all very well written, except for a few typos, but don't worry, it was nothing big!

    Yes, I'd absolutely love it, if you'd continue, and if you do update soon...
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  • From Lizardking01200 on December 27, 2008
    good story, please continue
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  • From ANON - Vahl on December 24, 2008
    It might be smut but is well written. It's significantly better than most of the work on this site. I hope you continue this story. The level detail and the pacing were almost perfect.
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  • From ANON - 181 on December 23, 2008
    Please, continue. VERY good smut. Odd question: Anal in the future? After all, she is teaching him ALL about a woman's body.
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  • From oldwolf on December 21, 2008
    Excellent story.

    Formatting needs work though. It is very confusing while reading at many points. Seems though several paragraphs got turned into one.

    Look forward to seeing what other plans General Connor and Cameron have for young John.
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  • From Merlinius on December 21, 2008
    I say please go on! I love this :)
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  • From Aaronleach45123 on December 21, 2008
    Awesome story .

    I say TO BE CONTINUED.
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