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Reviews for Beginning hurt and Healed finish

By : RugbyGod
  • From yaoilover08 on July 13, 2011
    please write more for this story i loved it and i want to read more of it, keep up the awwespke work. ^_^
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  • From ddcleadsinger on April 08, 2010
    PLZ UPD8 I WANNA NO WAT HAPPNS NEXT! TH 4MAT OF TH STORY IS WONDERFUL! CONTINUE ON PLZ!
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  • From pontaloon on August 08, 2009
    The chapters are a too short and you skip from one scene to another very quickly (one minute its '3 days later' then it's '2 weeks later'). if you fleshed out the story more and described what happened during the little time skips, it would give the story more continuity, instead of making it seem chopped up.
    other than that, i absolutely loooooove the subject matter!! i'm going to guess that in this universe, Mpreg exists and it's not just Sam and Dean who can get pregnant? Sam is soooooo having twins btw!
    Squeeeee!! update soon!
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  • From ANON - B on May 16, 2009
    This is a great chapter. Priceless as Dean tries to broach the subject of Sam's er size.
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  • From ANON - mel storm on April 10, 2009
    I'm sorry, but the line "You're sleeping on the couch" never gets old, no matter where or how you hear it. love the story hope you plan to keep updating. I'll be watching.


    peace

    mel storm
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  • From ANON - mel storm on April 10, 2009
    oh my god! that was really sad, not cry, but a pout, i feel your pain sort of way. poor Dean lost his child.
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  • From ANON - Anon on March 23, 2009
    Excellent... does Sammy maybe have more than one bun in the oven? Update soon!
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  • From ANON - mari on March 15, 2009
    kthx update plox
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  • From ANON - Anon on February 27, 2009
    Lol, if you've only done half a chapter it's usually best to wait until you've finished to post it ;) You're writing seems to have vastly improved though with this chapter and over the course of the story; the pacing is a bit slower and there's more detail to, there's also some emotional imagery and build-up for what's to come. I did think it was a bit short but if it's only half done then that's obviously why, lol. I look forward to more as you have a lot of potential and the beginnings of a good story.
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  • From ANON - Pickle Reviver on January 28, 2009
    OMG! Their baby died! T-T WEHHHHHHHHHHHHHH!!!!!!

    Sammy! Make Dean pregnant again dammit!

    Just so you know, I really love this story. It's really original, first time I've read a story where the baby actually dies.
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