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Reviews for Heartbreak Pity

By : CandyCaner
  • From willjames52 on July 16, 2009
    I liked the way you wrote Prue and Piper in this story, especially at the end when it could have turned overtly sentimental, but you kept it believable to the characters. I think the starting point that you chose for your story is one of the cutest Piper/Prue moments in the series. You asked for plot suggestions, and I have a couple: Piper and Prue lived together before the series started, and Prue was engaged to Roger. Why not go off that premise and have them discovering they have feelings for one another? Or if you want a one shot type suggestion, what about the time when Piper died because of the infected fruit and Leo saved her against the Elders orders? Prue and Piper could realize that they love each other because Piper almost died. Again, that was a cool story. I hope you become inspired to write another.
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  • From Ssjvegeta56 on July 06, 2009
    I really enjoyed this story, you should continue making Prue/Piper stories.
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  • From ANON - CharmedOneForever on June 21, 2009
    That was amazing! So hot! I don't normally like Prue and Piper pairings but that was really good :D
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  • From on June 09, 2009
    Very nice! Every time I see that scene now I'm going to think about this. I was actually going to say in the last review that I like it better when someone other then Prue is "in charge" or taking control of the situation. Turns out I didn't even have to say it, lol. Really Great just like I knew it would be!
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