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Reviews for Unforgiven

By : divinesynder
  • From ANON - Severus on February 29, 2016
    Any good piece of fan fiction has to be believable. You've done an excellent job of weaving this story into the plot line of Heroes, and the characters (as well as their feelings, thoughts and emotions) are almost indistinguishable from the originals. If Tim Kring had written a sex scene for Claire and Sylar/Nathan, this would be it. Kudos.
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  • From elibdally on January 28, 2010
    I actually enjoyed it!
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  • From Isadorabelle on December 07, 2009
    I'm looking forward to your next story! Love Sylar/Claire stories.
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  • From ICKYintimidation on September 18, 2009
    ok... so i am in love with this story.
    you told the story beautifully... especially the last chapter. it was very sexy, and had me panting... lol.
    i would absolutely LOVE to read more sylar and claire fiction from you... hell, even just more heroes fiction.
    it was fantastic, and i hope to see more soon!
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  • From alyssa01 on August 07, 2009
    Great ending, very realistic too, Claire's conflicting feelings for Sylar are deep and very well written. This is my favorite Sylar/Claire story yet. I look forward to reading your next story. :D
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  • From thadsmom on July 07, 2009
    Okay.... Yummy! This is a great story. SO much potential. A dangerous, predatory Sylar is such a sexy, sexy Sylar!!!

    I agree with another reviewer that he should revert to his Sylar-self before anything physical happens. I would think he would want Claire to see him, to remember being with him, not Nathan. I mean, if he just wanted to terrorize her, why bother telling her that he could be gentle, implying that he could make this a pleasurable experience for her? Maybe that could be a bargaining chip for her? If I were her, I would promise to cooperate fully, not fight him, whatever it takes as long as he didn't try to force me while looking like my dad!!! There isn't enough therapy in the world for that, you know? ;0)

    Plus, on the personal side, I just find Zachary Quinto SO much hotter than Adrian Pasdar. Adrian is a cutie-pie, don't get me wrong. But ZQ (as Sylar) is just that kind of dangerous-sexy that makes your teeth sweat!

    Really looking forward to your next installment. Write again soon!!! (all hail Sylar-Claire stories, I wish people would write more of them!!!)
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  • From zariva on June 26, 2009
    I love this! :o)

    Why doesn't Claire try to talk Syler to change back into 'himself'?
    I mean, I'm not sure which one would be less disturbing for her... but wouldn't HE want her to remember HIM being the first? o_O?

    I'm really exited to see how this will turn out! ^_^
    Hope the third chapter won't be giving you as much trouble as the second one did (the third is the charm, right? °_^)
    and that we'll be reading from you again soon!
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  • From alyssa01 on June 26, 2009
    Whoa this is starting to get pretty intense and scary, which of course means that it is starting to get REALLY good!!! ( not that it wasn't before ) I feel so sorry for Claire trapped in that situation and knowing that she can't heal from everything. Excellent work, keep it up!
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  • From alyssa01 on June 24, 2009
    Wow! Just Wow! I can't believe that until I found this fic i didn't consider how sick it is given Sylar's obvious attraction to her that he was posing as her father! This was amazing and you DEFINITELY have to right a sequel :D
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