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By : JaneKrahe

From silvermoonstini on August 21, 2011
Just wow! This is so cool, I don't know what to say apart from I want a sequel fast!
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From K.Blood on December 15, 2010
I had planned on reading only a couple chapters and then coming back to it later, but this was just so good that I ended up reading the whole thing in one sitting. I really enjoyed this and you handled the characters very well. The transitions between cannon and your own twists on the episodes were very smooth. I mean that when the slash happened I still felt as if I was in the world of Supernatural, instead of just reading another fanfic. Your writing is very good. You know how to capture the atmosphere and feeling of a scene. I wish more fanfiction authors had talent like yours. Thanks for writing this, it was a treat reading it. I hope you find the time to do a season five but if not that's okay. I hope to read more Supernatural stuff from you in the future.

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From AngelynTeinill on August 04, 2010
Okay, girl. Here's the deal. I just made an account for your writing, I love it. :) The thing I dislike about most fan-fiction is it's just pairings all over the place, but no actual chemistry between the people in question. You did a really nice job representing everyone in Supernatural with this story, and making them seem right... And I have a really serious question for you. You've seen season five now, probably at this point... And if you're willing, man, I would seriously hope you would make stories to those episodes as well. I love the way you capture Castiel being so torn, and Dean's inner workings, and I'm in love with your portrayal of the different scenes. If you could, just drop me a line whether your answer be yes or no. Dude, I haven't had enough Castiel and Dean hehe. xD Anyway, also I think Fallen by Sarah would have been a fantastic song to represent the fiction as well, even though it's a bit more mainstream, I think it fits absolutely perfectly, mostly for Dean and how obliterated he actually is by everything that happens to him... Ah well, hopefully I'll hear from you, fantastic job! :3
~Angelyn
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From Sanchan85 on May 02, 2010
Wow!!!

I love it!!!!
When I first watched Season 4 I also had the idea of way too much sexual tension between Dean and Cas, and I soo hope that you start on the 5th season. Your version of the 5th season of course.
I am always waiting for the next episode to be online (in Germany they are not yet published on TV, so you have to find ways to get the US versions!), but to combine it with your fanfiction would be interesting!!!!
So please write on!!!

Bye Sanchan
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From MoveThemHands on April 12, 2010
I love you.

This story gives me shivers! It moves me so deeply. I didn't want to read it, because I was afraid it would ruin my imagined world of Cas and Dean but...but you made it better! You're amazing!

I was so afraid you'd make them OOC and crazy stupid but everything EVERYTHING is perfect! You didn't made them into something I couldn't see them being. *groans* I wish I could express how I feel but I'm terrible with words!

XD I felt torn when I had to leave for work. This damn story has been plaguing my mind!!

You're a witchy woman! Casting spells over the words of this story, stealing my SOUL! and I wouldn't have it any other way! ;D

Please tell me you send emails when you update? I would much appreciate that! Email: Invisible_Pink_Unicorn@live.com please~ I'm not ashamed to beg! xD

Thank you so much for this story!! and giving me something to giggle pervertedly at while at work :3

Sorry I went all stalker fangirl on you X_x Hopefully you understand!
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From Kat1132 on March 27, 2010
I hope you continue to write this. I would love to see their further interactions through the fifth season.
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From MasterofPie on January 04, 2010
haha I haven't made it past season two but I will catch up soon
Ooohhh, i can already feel the love hahah liked your first chapter and now onto the next :D
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From Safir84 on January 04, 2010
Awesome ending, I loved it, but now I'm craving more, I really hope you do one on S5 too, would be so cool! The character interaction was great as always and everything was well written! Kudos and thanks for sharing!

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From Safir84 on November 22, 2009
I think I�m in love with this story, I really like it! Big kudos to you, for writing it! The plot�s rather brilliant; I love it and the character portrayal�s too, as well as the character interaction, especially Dean/Cas, well, of course! It�s also very well written, pretty funny and the smut�s so hot and very nicely described, not bad at all for a �slash virgin,� as you put it yourself, hehe!

I really liked this sentence from chapter one; �Castiel had brought him to orgasm with nothing but a hand on his arm and a harsh word in his ear.� So awesome, if that would have happened I sure would have gone straight to Heaven, lol!

I cannot help but feel sorry for Dean about what happened to him in Hell; Alastair sure is an evil son of a bitch! I never liked him! You could pretty much imagine that he had done something like that to Dean!

You�re truly a talented writer; I love how you describe everything, the scenes, the dialogs and the characters, of course, too! One can easily imagine Dean/Cas in your scenes, they are so sweet and true to canon, I believe! And it�s all so sad too, a perfect mix of all emotions there is!

4-20: The Rapture, was one of my favourites, of course, smut galore, hehe! Even tough it was all a dream, so freaking hot, steamy and sexy!

�Why? There was no why. Because he was Dean, because he was strong and fragile and beautiful and flawed and everything. �He�s... home.� Castiel cried out as fire ripped through him, lava coursing through his being, the edges of his Grace crisping like flesh in hot oil.� So beautiful, I really liked this one, as well as this;

�Chains clenched around his wings, and through the fog, Castiel managed to think about Dean, and wish Dean had thought to include them in their little dream-walk. He wished Dean had run his hands over the feathers, through them, under them, because Castiel was sure he�d have come from the first touch of Dean�s fingers to his trembling wings.� Man, that was just breathtakingly beautiful, Cas wished that Dean would have touched his wings, me too, it would have been so epic and whatnot!

Zachariah is an ass, just like Uriel was, oh well! And what happened next, well, at least Cas was able to go back, but he couldn�t let Dean know anything, so sad and heartbreaking! I just hated that scene in the show, oddly enough not yours, well, not as much that is!

"Dean, I can't." he heard himself saying, meaningfully, urgently. Because he wanted Dean to believe, wanted Dean to know that he had no choice, that he lo- cared for Dean, and that all of this was out of Castiel's control. And somewhere in the back of his mind, he wondered if Dean still thought him beautiful.� Aww, Cas loves Dean, but he�s in denial, of course! Another devastatingly beautiful and sad paragraph from you!

I absolutely cannot wait to read more, so please update soon�and please more smut, laughs!

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From kaibajoey1 on October 05, 2009
I give you lots of love and can't wait for more! And for a slash virgin you rock!
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From AngelicCherazz on August 25, 2009
*jumps up and down*
This is one of the most enjoyable and well-written 'canon' stories I've ever read! SQUEE! I am so in love with this! It's how things should've gone! I'm dying for the next part!

"Castiel knew he shouldn�t feel as he did, shouldn�t feel at all, but he dared any of his brothers and sisters to watch over Dean Winchester and maintain a stone heart."
- *wibble* Such an epic line! No one but Uriel could pull that dare off xD

Beautiful job! You should post this on LJ! On the community "deancastiel"
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From AngelicCherazz on August 25, 2009
Wow! This is wonderful! I love stories in which the author uses actual dialogue! I do it all the time in my Dean/Cas fics ^_^

"Then, without warning, Castiel placed his hand squarely over the scar on Dean�s arm, his hand settling into the grooves of the burn as if it were made for it. Which, of course, it was.
Dean bit his lip to keep from crying out as power tingled from Castiel�s hand, biting along his skin like electricity."
- IF ONLY! *asplodes* Raise your hand if you demand for Castiel to touch his mark again? *hand shoots up*

Oh God, and Dean cuming just from the touch! YUM!

Nicely done!
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