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Reviews for Crazy Pillow Talk

By : JayDee
  • From Shadowknight12 on January 20, 2011
    Hahahah, I can never praise your sense of humour enough. Even in the darkest fics, your occasional quips make me burst into laughter ("like Rachel in High School"). And tentacle rape! That's always fun to read about. It was an extremely entertaining fic, especially with the "Chandler is a girl!" twist at the end. Excellent job!
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  • From ANON - Anon on January 14, 2011
    As ever, your trademark twist at the end just made me smile (although my favorite childhood teddy has been moved to a box underneath a pile of crap in the back of my closet due to an odd glint in its eye). Great work! :D
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  • From FairySlayer on January 12, 2011
    The moment I saw which fandom this was for I knew I so had to read this. The idea is great to start with, but the way you tell it makes it a pure hilarious joy to read. (It also forces me to restrain myself from just filling this commentary with puns.) "[...]the first homicidal impulses of your favourite childhood teddy" was a great aside and gave me a laugh to match. I also couldn't shake the image of the pillow crawling across the floor and climbing up into his bed while he was at work, even without it being mentioned. Like everything else, it's creepy and funny at the same time.

    On the serious side, the description of how it took position and then grabbed him, then humiliated him was terrific. After that it wasn't clear why it was masking his fear until the transformation was in progress. The idea that he, now she, would convince herself that being a man was only a dream was good because people, we, always have to do that to keep our worldview from collapsing. Though the fact that almost everyone else was brainwashed too makes it clear that The Mattress King's influence is more powerful than even he let on at first.

    (On that subject, I wondered why he'd ever allowed Janice enough freedom to ever stray in the first place, but that gets boring. It's like using cheat codes in games.)

    Now I wonder if The Mattress King would want to see Janice and Chandler together.

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  • From ApolloImperium on January 12, 2011
    o.O I sorta wanna get rid of my pillows now...
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  • From pittwitch on January 12, 2011
    "Like Rachel in high school," LOL! That was great. The Mattress King exacts his revenge! Thanks JayDee, really needed that. Now, I wonder if I could send someone I know one of those pillows. :D
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