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Reviews for Nothing happens to me.

By : Trollmia
  • From JadeTaillia on November 10, 2012
    So...this story was utterly adorable. I wish you would do a sequel or another one of them! It was wonderful.
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  • From Electraroad on January 31, 2012
    Please, you need to continue you this.

    So much fluff, love it!
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  • From ANON - FoxesBlood on August 19, 2011
    That was very cute, I liked it a lot. :) Eventhough I'm normally not really into total fluffiness, but Sherlock's quirkiness and John's confused made it a really fun read. :D

    You should try having it beta-read though, it had some weird typing errors and a few grammar slip-ups. D: But I am a grammar nazi, sorry. o__o
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  • From Silverwindfara on April 29, 2011
    Verkligen superbra du fångar deras personligheter och har ett härligt språk då du skriver.
    Tack för att du delade med dig
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  • From Kip on March 03, 2011
    Lovely story, and you conveyed the characters nicely, but oh dear you really do need to work on your grammar, and a bit (well, a lot really) of spell-checking would do wonders!

    Personally I find it very hard to truly appreciate a piece of writing when I find myself consciously noticing how many times the writer has changed tense in one sentence, or written 'you' instead of 'yours', etc., while I'm reading. Try and get rid of these sorts of problems before you post, as they disrupt the flow of the piece and leave the reader focussing on the delivery instead of the content.

    You clearly have ideas (which is something that no amount of teaching can impart) which gives you the advantage of something to work with, and grammar and punctuation can be mastered - look to some of the excellent work around this site for guidance (check out TwistedHilarity / cu-kid / DancingGrimm). Some tweaking of the text and you would have a very readable piece here.

    Perhaps you're not that practised at proof reading yet, in which case having a Beta give the piece a quick look-over before you post it would solve a lot of these niggles and leave your readers free to concentrate on the story you're actually telling.

    Best wishes with your writing, and I hope to read more of your work in the near future.

    'Purr
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