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Reviews for Love Fire, Love Destruction

By : Hellhound666
  • From random_insanity on June 12, 2012
    loved it anything that you come up with will me awesome can't wait for more
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  • From random_insanity on June 12, 2012
    love it love the mythology in the story
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  • From random_insanity on June 12, 2012
    loved it i generally love dean & john but i would choose gabe & cas
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  • From random_insanity on June 12, 2012
    loved it loved the criminal minds quote someone's is a CM fan lol so am i haha
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  • From random_insanity on June 12, 2012
    loved it amazing & interesting
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  • From Danyealle on October 04, 2011
    Though this story has potential to be wonderfully different, there are some serious issues with grammar, punctuation, capitalizing things that don’t warrant it and such that tend to detract from the enjoyment. You keep capitalizing kitsune when you shouldn’t. Doing that is like capitalizing dog, cow, horse, etc. Along with that, you have a habit of starting many sentences in paragraphs with the same work, making it read in an awkward way, detracting and throwing you off. There is also the fact that you don’t explain why Sam became a kitsune rather than have demon blood, or if you did, I didn’t catch it. That doesn’t seem to make sense as his powers come from a demonic source. Such a things make it confusing if you are incorporating it into the canon setting. Overall, it has potential and is an original idea! Kudos!
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