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Reviews for Star Trek Lust

By : lexxfan4life
  • From Dragonlady on January 22, 2017

    This story was a pretty good attempt execept for a few mistakes, hope you don't mind me saying;

    1, Spock calls McCoy 'Doctor' not 'McCoy'

    2, when the girl and kirk get together you use the word clit - you actually have the wrong body part - call it a pussy/cunt/vag or whatever but it may help to take a look at some other stories to get better use of wording and terminology.

    Other than that you had a good story line.  


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  • From LittleMissRachel007 on March 18, 2012
    Pretty good so far, dialogue could use a little work though.
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