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Reviews for Playing By The Numbers

By : Prentice
  • From on March 25, 2012
    I love White Collar but there are so few fics for it here on AFF. But your story definitely makes it about quality, not quantity. I've read a lot of WC fics on other sites & I've never seen one like this. It's an interesting twist having Neal & Peter involved before Peter even knows Neal IS Neal. I can't wait to see how & when Peter finds out who Kyle really is & what happens when he does. I also like your handling of Elizabeth. You don't kill her or turn Peter into a liar/cheater. It's a very original approach (again, haven't seen it ever handled in this way) while it doesn't put the characters into Alternate Universe territory. It could be canon since we never see Peter & El do more than be loving & affectionate (their sex lives aren't explored like Neal's has been) so having them be loving companions who see others on the side is plausible. Having each chapter as another encounter is a fresh approach as well. Some may complain about the length of each chapter, but the set up, each an individual encounter, beginning through end, between Neal & Peter pretty much dictates the length. It all flows naturally & is well written. I look forward to reading more. Keep up the excellent work.
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