Click Here!

  • 1

Reviews for Addicted

By : Jayded
  • From Pixie_Dreamer on March 20, 2020

    I'll just say this. You're story was so good I actually made an account just to be able to leave a review. And I've read stories on here for years. I really hope you continue the story at some point. I would love to see where it goes with Elena trying to keep it all hidden from Stefan and how Damon reacts along the way! Anyway, great story!


    Report Review

  • From ANON - Amanda Brown on February 21, 2015
    This is so hot!!!!!! I hope you will update more!!!!!!!!!
    Report Review

  • From ANON - sparks420 on August 24, 2014
    Plz continue writing its really good
    Report Review

  • From ANON - slightlytwisted84 on August 10, 2012
    I think Elena's ambivalence was kind of pointless, suddenly pushing Damon away. I also think the story was a little long, getting to the end. With that being said, I'm disappointed there isn't a chapter about her 'training'. Are you going to write more?
    Report Review

  • From cherrprn4 on June 29, 2012
    I love this story
    Report Review

  • From ANON - Jadelyn on June 29, 2012
    awesome story
    Report Review

  • From FromAfar on May 07, 2012
    "Damon I have a problem." I finally whimpered feeling more then a little pathetic" - it seems only Elena understands what's going on, the brothers cannot get the clue - why? it's so obvious. Elena's like a junkie in a withdrawal period. All the 'symptoms' are so clear - why Damon cannot see it for what it is? It must be very trivial to him and Stephan, after several lives-long experience..
    "..whenever you or any vampire sinks their fangs into my skin" - just how often does it happen to her?:)

    I'd say too much talking and discussing in the story. Until ""You want me to bite you, I'll bite you" he snarled" - finally there!
    And she believes she loves Stephan.. Who's naive and delusional in the story? Elena I knew from the series would come clean about her urges to her boiyfriend.
    "Forget Stefan, forget that I was cheating on him, I needed Damon, I needed his cock in me and I needed him now. "God Damon...fuck me...please..." - that's WHAT she really wanted, all along, then :) So simple, again.

    What a little hypocrite your little Elena is: " But then the world seemed to catch up to us and I was pushing Damon away from me, Stefan's face popping to the forefront of my mind, my lips drawn into a frown.
    "What the hell was I thinking?" I muttered trying to straighten my clothes and failing rather pathetically, "and you…"I demanded rounding on Damon, if I was going down I was gonna pull him down with me, "what were you thinking! I'm your little brother's girlfriend." Damon cocked an eyebrow as I started to freak out, my hands pushing back through my hair my eyes wide. "Oh god…"

    Yes, what the hell? The story is a bit too much confusing for my liking. First, it's all about the thrill of a bite, then - sex, and after - "nothing happened".. Poor Damon, poor both guys :)
    Report Review

  • 1
T.O.S. | Content Guidelines | DMCA Info | F.A.Q. | Facebook | Tumblr | Abuse | Support | Contact | Donate

Click Here!