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Reviews for The Thirteenth Step

By : ExOnEv
  • From ANON - wagamama hime on October 31, 2014
    I don't know if I'm just a glutton for punishment or something but I really enjoy this story, even though the tension has me so anxious my stomach is in knots. Haha. I can't help but feel bad for both of them. To me, Spencer's got it so bad he's bordering on obsessed but I also feel like he's going to be the type to be more invested (and more quickly invested) than his partner and that's the type of person who can be taken advanatge of. And Derek seems so resistant to this (all those childhood demons), but kind of seems like he's been taken hostage (on one hand he wants to protect Reid from relapsing and wants to be a good friend, but it also seems like he's finding himself becoming a slave to his desires as well). So, like I said, the tension is THICK. But this is the first D/S fic I've read where derek is almost vehemently against a relationship with spencer and I find that dynamic to be very intriguing. Anywho, I'll definitely keep reading. Keep up the good work!
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  • From ANON - Anon on October 31, 2014
    I don't know if I'm just a glutton for punishment or something but I really enjoy this story, even though the tension has me so anxious my stomach is in knots. Haha. I can't help but feel bad for both of them. To me, Spencer's got it so bad he's bordering on obsessed but I also feel like he's going to be the type to be more invested (and more quickly invested) than his partner and that's the type of person who can be taken advanatge of. And Derek seems so resistant to this (all those childhood demons), but kind of seems like he's been taken hostage (on one hand he wants to protect Reid from relapsing and wants to be a good friend, but it also seems like he's finding himself becoming a slave to his desires as well). So, like I said, the tension is THICK. But this is the first D/S fic I've read where derek is almost vehemently against a relationship with spencer and I find that dynamic to be very intriguing. Anywho, I'll definitely keep reading. Keep up the good work!
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  • From ANON - delia cerrano on September 25, 2012
    Terrific story! Please keep it up. Love this couple. How difficult this is for both...especially Morgan. But for Spencer it is very hard also as he fears losing one of the rocks of his life - Morgan. He doesn't have many people in his life and none as important to his well being as Morgan.
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  • From ANON - Shelby on August 11, 2012
    I can't wait for the next chapter. This is an excellent story. More please!
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  • From ANON - Crystal on August 10, 2012
    Please write more soon! Your story was very well written and seems to stay in character as well. I loved it!
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  • From pipinheart on July 10, 2012
    Would love to hear more. I wonder if Morgan is right about Spencer and he is using again.
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  • From bowsie22 on June 08, 2012
    Oh no. Poor Reid. Morgan only wants to help. Can't wait for more =D
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  • From lilijuliet on June 05, 2012
    This is one of my favorite fics! I am so glad you are continuing it here. Your writing is incredible and this story is realistic. It's better than cannon for me.
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