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Reviews for It Rushes Through You

By : SenNightShade
  • From RogueMudblood on June 24, 2012

    I'm very happy to have come across this little ficlet - I enjoyed it very much! But I have a couple of questions for you:

    When you have Derek beginning the act of fellatio, you state that he's tasting Stiles' cum - did you mean precum? Just curious, since you'd said that Stiles fingered himself while in the shower, but nothing about him climaxing, or even being erect. (I would think the second would have resulted in a bit more embarrassment on his part once he realized Derek was watching him.)

    I know normally, when using the phrase "monster cock" in PWP, it's simply a reference to size. In this case, however, as the subject is a werewolf, it takes on a secondary meaning. I'm curious as to whether that was intended?

    Either way, an excellent play on words, and again, this was a terrific piece. Thank you for sharing and happy writing!
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